This is a crack fic... no rhyme or reason and the pacing is like a strobe light that changes colors each flash.

yes harry is the muggle version of a wizard no more he was a giga wizard 500 plus years old and a virgin

Too bad there aren't AU versions of this Potter who were a Female Potter or a Gamer Mary Sue Ravel Phenex.

And at that moment I just threw it. What the crap? This is the first time I want to hit the author in the face. It is unfortunate that the hero did not even have time to grow up and find a girlfriend. I regret now that I generally started reading this. Just wasted time.

I like the story! it's very fun to read. However, often the story reads like a summary. Especially once "Harry" has travelled outside of the assassin estate.

I have no complaints about the story except for the above fact and that the story should be looked over by a proofreader a little more.

Beyond that, I feel that what Harry does with his time isn't what I would do with mine but that's simply a difference in opinion and objectives. Namely I would want to travel with Biscuit, Meet Luna, and look into wooing Tsunade at the very least. But that's because I think with my lower brain.

I dont see how he can be forcibly teleported with his galaxy gem in his inventory.

I only just realized that the portal that warped him from hxh to one piece maybe should not have worked because of his galaxy stone that prevents forced teleportation. Also tattoos aren't sewn on as far as I know.

I'm happy I found this. Sometimes stories with many crossovers are unreadable, which is a shame. Fortunately, this is great. You are also rare for including hunter x hunter in your story. I havent read much manga in years but I have a permanent place in my heart for hxh. Thanks for writing this.

the hopping around from thing to thing continues, I just can't get into it. Sorry, I'll have to move on to some other fic here.

This jumps around entirely too fast, we are expected to understand things that aren't explained because we do not have the familiarity of the settings that you seem to expect.

Also, he pulled a pokeball out of his ass.

Hah, I love how he's overpowered in ways that are fun to read about.

Love this chapter and its casual vibe, the use of elapsed time, and actually showing him doing things with his power rather than just powering up for the sake of it like many gamer fics.

You have a ton of mistakes in your writing, so I'll just recommend Zoho Writer to, which is a site that I personally use mainly for writing. God that sentence sounds really fucking snobby, but what I'm getting at is that whenever you make mistakes in your writing, the words will be underlined with red and when you click on them, a thing shows up showing words that are similar and or might be the correct way to spell the word.

Holy shit, this is going really fast. I mean, 7 chapters in and we're already like 20 episodes in with also some years not even being part of the actual plot. But I still enjoy this. This is somehow relaxing, laid back in more accurate words.

I mean, instead of "Devil Cooking" I would've named it "Demon's Flay" because it's more accurate and actually sounds cool.