kind of wish that there was more to this. It sounds like a great start to a story.

I like it, though it could use another chapter, watching the aftermath of this would have been fun. This feels abrupt, though not quite completely out of left field after that kiss and Nui's reaction in canon. And Ryuuko did spend time bonding with Senketsu over being artificially created creatures, a quality she also shares with Nui, but a little follow up with discussion of their relationship could help it feel less abrupt.

This is almost the story I dreamed of, a least topic wise.

Awwwww

I wish this was canon

Ahhhhh! Just what I needed, something short and sweet u

If only nui actually acted like that in the show they may have had satsuki, nui, and ryuko team up against ragyou in the final battle

I really like this. sucks it isn't a bit longer though.

You know, I think this might be the kind of thing that Nui dreams about at night. You know, apart from having arms again.

Still a better ending than the real episode.

That was pleasing. Never saw this pairing coming but now that it happened I can't help but feel drawn to it. This was short and sweet, but... like I said, sweet. I definitely love the idea you have here and Nui definitely needs some Ryuuko love too

... Ok, it will never happen. But I loled so hard when I imagine the reactions of the others.

Short but powerful, i like it a lot! Kind of sweet too in its own way

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But that kiss (friggin first one in the series lol) was totally surprising.
Nicenicerawr

Well, well, soldier...

O...k...so, it was nothing but morbid curiosity that brought me here, I will admit. LOL

But...man, damn you, episode 21, for that smooch! o3o I honestly don't know what to think anymore...but for a short little one-shot with plenty of OOC...this wasn't so bad at all. :3

This is a very, very interesting concept, and I gotta admit I like it, 'cuz, well...why the Hell not? XD If somebody wrote a longer, more detailed story, Hell I'd read it. X3

Good work, Marine!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

You know what? for all of Nui"s creepyness and evil, she is one of my favorite character. (Senkatsu and Mako share's the first place.) And while i used to shipe Ryouko with Satsuki, the last few episode made it squik indusing.

What I meant to say is that I support NuiKo.