Ok I was like, “This is interesting.” Then I started to get worried when the Kyūbi would give him a doujutsu, “This might make him OP.” Then you have probably Deadpool level of healing and you changed his DNA and NAME to turn him into a OC, that you put in the story. You had me in the first half I’m not gonna lie, but then you had to change his looks and DNA. Next time just make an OC.

can't wait for the next chapter in this story

His name is Naruto N.A.R.U.T.O Naruto

I'm really excited to read this; I love hyoton and shakuton is definitely new and interesting. Reading stories with Naruto having the sharingan or rinnegan got old fast, and most original dojutsu are really op, while yours is reasonable yet power

Good start

It's a great story and please continue this story!

this is interesting shame its dead

Hey. I really enjoy this story. I don’t know if you’ve abandoned it or if you just haven’t been able to get it done, but greatly look forward to the next chapter.

Story is already abandoned so it doesn't matter anymore, but I'm sick and tired Naruto being abandoned by his family just to let Kushina back in. Seems like 9/10 neglect fics have Naruto forgive his mother enough to let her back in despite having 0 reason to. Kushina woke up every morning for 13 years and made a conscious decision to not return each time. She is just as guilty as minato, if not more so; at least he isn't pretending to care now that Naruto is in front of him.

The name ikari though original is hard to connect with Naruto it would have been better if u used a more familiar name like maybe menma or maelstrom. plz try it.

I am loving this
:D

Tbh this seemed like a good idea for a story but imo u ruined it by renaming Naruto, you just made your own character and put him in the Naruto universe while getting rid of naruto

Great story

DANGAN DANGAN! ITS A KAZE FUUTON DANGAN THINGAMABLOPPER!

"I wouldn't trust you if you told me water was wet!" Dude. Water ISN'T wet. We just get the feeling of wetness from water.