Really interesting take on time travel. I liked this.

I have never encountered this concept before. Reading this story, it's very good. I love how it ends almost sort of as a cliffhanger. If you ever decide to expand this story, I am pretty sure it will be brilliant. This is a delightful piece of work and I am frankly surprised that not many people seem to like it.

Me sorry, me no get it. Me a house elf. :)

Interesting as heck

I like it

I like this vere moving story and hope to see more of your work one day !

The Crimson Mage.

Ended on an almost-cliff hanger! Oh no.
Still a darned good story though. Thank you.

Wow, that was frickin fantastic. Please write a sequel to this one, I am so curious what happened to those two.