This was a nice 3 shot. Kudos.

A poignant and lovely closing chapter to this short but moving tale. Thanks so much for sharing! I really loved how you portrayed everyone in this. Characterization was spot on.

A great little story. The only thing that I think might have been nice would have been some insight into Alistair's feelings/direction after Elissa's departure.

Wow - there aren't a great deal of 'Guildmaster Crow Zevran' fanfics out there that I've found and I feel your characterisation of G!Zev here is really believable! I can certainly see this very lethal, sensual man acting relaxed and yet casually controlling the flow of conversation with calculated, self-indulgent pauses (like savouring the fruit), all while extruding danger. :) And yet he is clearly still conflicted about Elissa... and you could feel his anger towards Alistair... Great characterisation! Please continue, I'd love to see how this story (and their relationship) develops.

I love the first chapter and I love this chapter. Update soon, I need to know what will happen next.

I like this. Followed.

What a heartwrenching and poignant beginning. You manage to make everyone here sympathetic and realistic-quite a feat considering the subject matter. Nice work.