This kinda reminds me of the time when I was younger and I put on a fresh pair of sweat pants (that were ridiculously big on me) and when I started walking around my dads sock fell out of my pants leg. I was just so glad it feel out before school.

I aspire to write half as good as you wrote this! I can not explain how much I have loved this and I really just want to thank you for having the idea and drive to write this.

Amazing work! Really, you got their personalities spot on, and it seemed like something that would eventually happen too. Enjoyed the read thoroughly!

i haven't finished reading this yet, but i have this DREADING feeling that this this is all going to be some hilarious misunderstanding XD
Ah, that was a pleasant surprise. But i called that blunder at the end so points for me!
Alright, I'm absolutely just undeniably grateful that this was the first Soma M rated story I read. I've read things like lemons and smut scenes before, so i have to say you really nailed this. You kept it real, kept it intimate, a tiny bit OOC on Maka's part (but what can we expect considering the context of the story?) but most of all and probably the best part is the fact that you refrained from (over)using the slang terms for their "parts". Made it feel less like third rate smut and more like a proper story with characters that actually have genuine personalities.
All in all I'm really happy with how well written this was, so if that isn't enough of a congratulations, then i don't know what is!

Hahahaha! XD Oh my god, FINALLY someone writes an M fic as honest, and awkward as the real deal. Now, I'm not really one with much(any) experience, but it's pretty obvious it'd be awkward your first couple times. I applaude you for one, making an amazing story, and two, for making it so(hilariously) real. Good job! This was just great! :)

Man, this was sooo good. I can't wait to get on your level. your such a great writer and I really enjoyed this story, really amazing

I know what's on Soul's menu for tonight.

Oh my gods! This is seriously one of the best SoMa smut stories I've read, like no joke. At points I was giggling my ass of an at others I was thinking: "Aww, that's so like sweet!"

It's difficult to find really good stories with a bit of smut, but this was beyond exceptional. Thanks for the awesome story!

[Burning]

Haha this is good I like it

A-MAY-ZING. Truly! I have only JUST gotten into Soul Eater (like I've seen all of 3 episodes) and I already LOVE the relationship Maka and Soul have and their dynamic and what not. This was really well done, very in character I feel. Bravo!

AaaaaaaaAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHhhhhh itwasGORGEOUS!

'Twas BEAUTIMOUS

OMFG IM HAVING A SPAZTIC ATTACK

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