Loved the story.

Truthfully, Morrigan was the one to approach my character out of concern. When I made my character I made sure to complete all personal quests and become friends with all of those in the group. I didn't kill Flemeth, however. I couldn't kill her. Too strong.

Brilliant take on the ritual Alistair had with morrigan, I don't think he would have been able to go through it without some sort of assistance as he hated her and I feel he would in no way be attracted to her either. I've read some that have morrigan putting a spell on herself to change her appearance but this is the first one ive read that has him unable to perform. Besides he loves Elissa too much! I love the sweet romance where he proposes in his sweet and delightful way too, very well done :)

yes yes yes so much yes. i love the fluff and romance in this scene. i will continue and favorite!

I've really enjoyed this story. You have a wonderful writing style and I like how the chapters switch between Alistair and Elissa. This last chapter was by far my favourite though. I just loved the interaction between Alistair and Connor. That's not something you see very often, and your take was beautiful. I agree Connor would make a good Grey Warden as well.

The idea of the Amells and Couslands being related was a nice touch too. There's very little information about Eleanor and she was voiced by the same person as Leandra Hawke so there's a definite possibility!

Elissa's chapters being more angsty makes sense as well. Poor Cousland Warden goes through more than anyone else in the game.

(Just FYI I noticed a couple of spelling and grammar errors, mostly in the earlier chapters. Not sure if you have a beta reader or not but happy to help if you don't. Admittedly it's been a while since I've done beta-ing but the offer is still there :) )

You...have...to...finish...this...PLEASE it's killing me!

I love the inserted stories for their relationship. I can completely picture Alistair's mannerisms and it's just too cute! Can't wait for another chapter... and to see how the Landsmeet will affect their relationship!

Omg I just fell in love with Alistair all over again.. breathtakingly good story xxx

I don't know why the hell you don't have any reviews for this yet. I think it's freaking brilliant. ;) the characters are all, well, in-character. which is a definite plus. I remember my jaw dropping at the part in the game where Wynn tried to get Cousland to leave Alistair, so I'm glad that you had them deal with that in this story. I mean come on, really, Wynn? let the kids have some happiness ;) I adore the interactions between Alistair and Elissa. beautiful. keep up the wonderful work!