| Reviews for Percy Jackson: Howl At the Moon |
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zaires234 chapter 12 . 7/24 When do you plan on updating this story? |
ASHARI463274348 chapter 11 . 5/29 will percy become a werewolf if he gets bitten? |
Moonbeam chapter 10 . 4/3 All that power yet he is still beaten! |
Silverhawk chapter 3 . 4/2 Nice, I swear am gonna eat late! |
Jasmine-Dragon chapter 2 . 4/2 I'll say not bad. I love this story |
Red-Raven chapter 1 . 4/2 Hi, I checked your excuse about PERCY being too perfect and I want to say a few suggestions, if you want him to have a few match then you can add characters like The Alpha pack, The beast of Gevaudan etc to make the story balanced! Please, a lot of people likes this story and now it's your chance to shine and to be one of the greatest authors, If I had a company I would've hired you as the number one agent. This isn't a flatter but an honest praise of your incredible work. I know you may think that just because am the only one saying this then it's worthless, not really, because am pretty sure the other readers also thinks the same. Just please don't abandon the story, for the readers sake including mine. Red-Raven With a total 5 stars to you |
Sue chapter 12 . 3/24 This is literally the best fic I have ever read. I have no word to express the amazingness of it. |
Earthspirit10 chapter 11 . 3/4 I mean to put this in chapter 12, but I already reviewed on that, and FanFiction wouldn't let me review on that chapter again, so I'm doing it here. But know that I mean this for the ENTIRE story. I've just re-read some of the other reviews, and the ones going against your story is making me so mad right now. For the grammar part, I think you ALREADY get it. I mean, come on. You just literally wrote that you will fix it. 10 people don't need to say it 10 times (that's probably exaggerating but still!). I think you're doing great. There are some parts where I notice mistakes, but I just ignore it, because the details and story makes up for it. And there are people criticizing how you're portraying Percy, which you also addressed in chapter 12. I know that you feel unhappy about it, and it's entirely your choice! But really, if it's because of the reviewers, you don't need to worry about them, because in my opinion, that's how Percy really is. "I'm not a killer" totally makes sense. He's really self-righteous even in the books; he let Polyphemus go in the Sea of Monsters for the gods' sake! He's not a complete murderer. Sure, Oceanus may be a titan, an evil one, but he doesn't have to kill. Besides, doesn't killing Oceanus mean giving the titan some satisfaction that Percy was mad enough to seek out him personally just to kill him for revenge? It makes perfect sense. Other things about Percy are great too! Even if it isn't in the books, I love this version of Percy. I don't mind if you change him a little, but I still want at least most of this Percy here. It's fine if you choose differently. It's entirely your choice. 3 There's this one reviewer I think, flaming on your beginning. I love betrayal stories, especially since they set up the story and how Percy would cope with it. Of course, that's probably me being a sadist, and that's not even close to scratching the surface of it, but it's what I feel. I love the beginning. That's all I have to say. This is a note to all you reviewers, too. Barla (the author) is doing the best she can. Don't judge her on what she does. Of course, I'm not talking about constructive criticism. I'm not calling out names, but there are some reviewers who are very rude and are putting her and her story down. I know it's not my place, but I feel compelled to say this to you guys. Barla, know that you are amazing. Please continue updating and don't let these jealous reviewers make you lose interest in this. Don't give up. 3 ~Earthspirit10 |
Earthspirit10 chapter 12 . 3/3 I don't know just how many times I've read this already - I lost count - but this story is still one of the best fanfiction of all time I've ever read. I love everything about this and it was really clever of you to start Percy's reunion with the rest of his family at the beginning of the story of Teen Wolf. It guides the character and creates some more bonding time as they go through these tragic events together. Percy's new powers are awesome - the wings! They're my favorite part of his powers (I kind of wish they were on 24/7 because they're so freaking cool, but I get that they would be hard to manage XD)! Oh, yes, and also, quick question: When is Percy going to tell them the truth? I think the gods and goddesses, including Chaos, told him that they will protect his friends from the rest of the gods and all the Greek monsters. Maybe it's because Percy wasn't ready and didn't want to burden his friends more than they are. It makes sense. Still, I'd love to see their reaction (especially Scott) about his godly family! I especially love Percy and Erica. Like the other reviewer, the ship name is definitely Perica. I usually ship either Percabeth or Pertemis very passionately, but there are some exceptions like this one! You've captured their blossoming relationship beautifully! I'd love to read more about it! I'm not trying to rush you or anything. You can take your time and update whenever you can. It's fine that you have writer's block. People get them a lot. Don't worry - you're doing more than amazing and I really want this story to continue! Please update! I want to know more of what will happen! The story just ended the excitement a little, but there will be more, I'm sure, and I just want to know how Percy will cope with this along with his friends! It's been about a year, 2 months, and 10 days (not entirely accurate). I'm not sure if it's just lack of time (because I know everyone is bound to have that issue) or if it's also you've lost some interest and, still determined, is trying to find some inspiration or needing something to help. I just want you to know that this is truly wonderful. I'm fully confident that you can finish this book - there are many fanfics out there that hasn't been updated for 4 years and then one day, they updated and eventually finished the book. Even if you haven't updated for 10 years, I'd still be waiting, knowing that you /will/ update, and it /will/ finish, because this book is absolutely beautiful and I want it to continue. I love this story so damn much. Know that there are people out there, many people, who support you and will be there with you in every way. You're an amazing author, and you deserve to fulfill your dreams and finish what you want to finish. I'd never written a review this long; this story is just that good. You inspire me so much, and I admire your writing. Never give up. 3 ~Earthspirit10 |
RandoFox chapter 1 . 1/11 At first, I was hesitant to read this story since most crossovers involving teen wolf just has a fuck ton of slash in it, which i'm not a fan of, but i decided to give it a shot. While I don't really like how you made percy so overpowered and im not a fan of the wings he has and i feel like he has way too many weapons, ok, there's a lot of things that you did that i dont like but I'll still read the story because im bored and have nothing better to do. |
Reece chapter 10 . 12/31/2019 Needs boobs and sex |
SmokeyJaeden1776 chapter 12 . 11/22/2019 OMG this is amazing! You are an amazing writer! I love this plot line, and the way you have made Percy. My fav thing about his powers is the WINGS! hands down that is the coolest thing. I can not wait until you post another chapter! |
BiancaIsTheBest chapter 1 . 10/20/2019 Did you abandon this? |
W A Y chapter 1 . 10/19/2019 coming back here after close to 3 years , i got the urge to read this again after reading trials of Apollo 4th book , still this fanfic was one of the best i've read |
Phoenixangel76 chapter 12 . 9/5/2019 this is such a great story i read all day it was useful to get my mind off all the stress in my life it made me smile all day |