Can the Cullens help?

Great story!

That was an excellent read, thanks for writing it.

I loved. Thank you for writing this and finishing it.

It didn’t bother me at first but now it’s kind of annoying that you keep getting your facts wrong. Blood does not have a nucleus and therefore has no DNA so you can’t tell if people are related just with their blood. If you think people are related then you have confirm a definite no but not get a true positive answer. There are 8 normal blood types in the world... blood has little to do with paternity. And also the whole “she looks like me” thing is also a bit weird because siblings only share about 25% of their DNA with one another which is about as close as two random strangers... it’s a good story, just the logic and facts are all wrong from the beginning.

Great story

That was a really cute story

I loved it.

I LOVED IT!

Why would you think putting such an awful slur would be okay? You are the one writing the story, Rick's words are your words, please take the slurs out of your story.

Oh thank god! :-D

I love this story and think you are a great writer, I love how you portray rick as like a physco who plays with his prey.

I envy Jamie's reaction when Shen finds out about the imprint, because I would totally freak out because you whole futures been planed and don't have much chice anymore. But Brady is just the sweetest so what I am trying to say is you are great!

you are an awesome writer! all the stories I've read didn't have proper grammar, didn't show proper emotion, and all it was was dialogue, how boring is that? I loved that you didn't get to overboard with certain stuff, and you had her phase at the perfect time. usually people who are writing about phasing usually do it at random times, I mean once when I was reading an article the character was perfectly content. it really didn't make any sense. I loved the plot, you barely even cussed either. (utterly grateful for that, if my mom saw the F word she'd freak out.)

I quite literally just got the feels - you are an amazing writer. Please dont abandon this worl you have created! These fanfics are absolutely amazing

Hopefully you will be able to do the other chapter stories one of these days:/ I really enjoyed Kori/Seth story and this one so very much. But I understand that you have a life and some things have just got to come before others:)