i love this so much! i'm such a sucker for hurt!Kili, and brotherly / family feels. :') i wish we could have seen this in the movie, but your writing more than makes up for the lack. thank you for sharing! i really enjoyed reading this.

Love these Durin family shorts, especially the lovely Kili whump.

Aww cute ending ! I Love the little family reaction !

Ha ha, admit it Kili! You FAINTED!
Lol. It's funny and very Kili-like when Kili wouldn't admit he was in pain and he fainted. Hehe nice story! No spelling errors, the writing flows beautifully, and the characters were perfect!
A job well done!

Really enjoyed reading this, but just a few things I would like to say; first, when you used the elvish, my friend is 'mellon-nín'. I know, it doesn't really matter, but I thought it might help. Other than that tiny detail, I really enjoyed this one shot qnd I can't wait for more!

Loved this story... I defintlay think all your stories should include the kili hurt scenes :)

Great work! :) I love the way you blend your story with movie events!

This was awesome! I really enhoyed this sequel! :) The ending was HILARIOUS! ;)
Keep up the good work! :)