What's his disease?

Simply beautiful :'3

Nice little read

Wowwww... this is something that I never expected you to write. Seriously, when I clicked on this, I has no idea you of all people wrote it. And then I read the author's note and I suddenly realized that, wow, the person who writes the drabbles wrote this.

Anyway, it was amazing... My favorite part was when Red said, "No more voices." That made it creepy and funny at the same time, considering that at one point I was one of those voices...

This made me feel sort of bad for Red and Gold, and his mom, which was something I also didn't expect when I clicked on this. Most TPP fanfictions I see are more humorous and random than this, but this was a welcome change from all the... chaos. Haha. Though I did really like the way you wrote Red being all random and weird with his PokeDex and walking skills.

And the part at the end with Red being "at peace" was sort of sad, but it also made it sound like he died or something. Which, now that I think about it, might be true. The end of the original TTP did say "THE END".

I shudder to think about our adventures into Hoenn, because there are so many ice and boulder puzzles :0 how are we going to get through them? And when is someone going to say "down" so we can be a girl character? Hopefully we won't keep getting the guy sprite, even though I don't really mind that much.

Well, this was one really long and slightly pointless review. Hope to read more from you soon.