Edward thought about attending the wedding? i think Bella would have killed him. Charlie will have to live his life alone , to bad for him. great story, thanks

neither Charlie or Renee are fit to be parents. he only thinks of his job and fishing and Renee only thinks of herself.

you got what you deserved Rose and i hope Jasper kills you.

Great job!

jacob is such a pansy ass child, when will he ever learn to keep his big moth shut?

charlie doesn't deserve a note after what he did. he may be her father, he may be worried, but he should never attacked her the way that he did.

this so exciting that i can't read fast enough to get to the next chapter!

Wondered when fairy boy would show up trying to get her away from Jasper

What is it going to be a boy or girl? Will Caius try another end around of the brothers and go after Jasper again?

guys she is a shield Maria can't hurt her, leave her behind and they will be having to hurt her down and rescue her .

Wonder if she realized that she has signed her death warrant,her and Alice along with Caius

Charlie is going to lose his mind when he finds out that his prisoner has he sic the Fed's on them I wonder?

I am fairly sure he lost her when he accused her of being a slut,then his temper tantrum just sealed her shield kicks in soon so they can get around Alice.

It will be so much fun when they finally track down mystic Meg and take her and her master kind of gift does Becky have I wonder?

Don't remember but is,she eighteen yet if so Charlie can piss up rope with his attitude towards her