#DomericRuinsEverything

Absolutely brilliant. When I saw the title of this chapter, I knew it would be.

Each chapter is better than the last.

Now *this* is fanfic!

Awesome story man i love it, i can't wait to see how this story ends.

You know, if there is one thing I love about fanfiction its that no matter what story I'm reading, whenever Jon meets a girl he gets along with she always, ALWAYS says that one line, "You know nothing."

Damn, was wishing Jon would take the position. Why does he have to be a little ninny everytime? Haha, fantastic story so far though. Your writing is great, and I love the POVs of the secondary characters. I'm glad you went that way.

Not going to lie, this fic updates so infrequently that I totally forgot about it.

But it was nice coming back to a few new chapters. I’m pretty damn lost now. Everyone’s been at the wall, I can’t tell if it’s one long ass night or the days blend together. Stuff has happened, but I don’t know what.

Thank you for the read sir, it’s one of the stories that got me back into fanfiction, but I must bow out. I’m lost and I have no intention of rereading from the beginning. Maybe once it’s complete...thanks again!

This chapter was one of your best yet! But I need more of Jon showing his the best Targerean sibling and the prince that was promised!

Great chapter. Stannis goes down like a true badass. The final charge and his speech beforehand were pure awesome. Through the overall situation is still desperate.

God i haven't read this in a while so started from the beginning forgot how much I loved this fic Rhaenys and Jon are my favorites also love the dialogue between sarella and Jon would be nice if they you paired them

This story is so well-written and original! Having the wall brought down by Domeric's stupidity? Brilliant move. And Stannis going out in a blaze of glory makes for such a fitting end for him. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this story!

Crap...

And in the next chapter we shall see... Rhaenyes and Aegon DIAF and Jon become Da TRUW KAHNG he was always meant to be coz narrative!

As much as I lurve seeing the Dornish get their cummupace (stupid fukahs), this is gettin a bit trite.

Thank the gods you’re almost finished.