Ok, so I know you haven’t updated in almost 4 years, but I hope you continue the story one day! You have me on the edge of my seat. I don’t want Sarah to die. I want her to have her eternity with Dwayne and Laddie. It’s killing me that Sarah is dying. What Dwayne said was harsh about it not matter if Sarah dies because he would go on living without her, but I don’t want him to give up on her. I wish he could just admit to her that he can’t live without her and to not leave him and laddie. Oh this story hurts so good. That’s all I can say, so I like I said I hope you update one day. You have me on the edge of my seat. Til hopefully next time.

is she gonna die?...

ahh more chapters!

I love it! I love her witty remarks and how chill she is! Brilliant!

That ending is adorable. PLSDUNKEELTHEBOYSDOE.

Omg I thought that she was already dead!

For Lex maybe Dakota Fanning

I think for Shane… the guy who plays Alex Lightwood in The City of Bones.

please save sarah

Ahh man. You have to update! Like right now :P I need more, it's not fair...*David voice* Nina you have to update...

Even though I was hoping for Sarah/David 'cause it's kiefer but I still love it and I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters but it's getting late and I need sleep (unfortunately I'm not a vampire haha)

Seeing as you faced alot of my stories (thank you :D) thought I'd check your stories out. This is really great, first chapter definitely has my taste going, lol, ahh man really can't wait to finish work so I can crack on to the next story. Your writing style is amazeballs.

Finally got round to reading this! I love Sarah and Laddie's relationship, and your writing in general is just brilliant :) I hope you update soon!

Update when you can im looking forward to reading on will sarah ever change

Interesting chapter please update soon i cant wait to read the next chapter