Omg! I really love this story.
My heart is racing righ now. Those two are so cute and wow, hot too.
Thanks for this beautiful thing, you're amazing.

I really want to translate your storyand share it in Spanishperhaps you're gonna say not but.I really want to do it. this story is fantastic! And Spanish people may gonna love your fic a lot.

Whatever, I love it so much! I enjoyed reading your fanfic.

Woow! This was soo amazing, cute and hot! I love it!

oh my God I love how this is written! it makes my heart race and eyes water. adore this. so much

Glad to know I'm not the only weirdo who likes this couple. This is my first time reading about them and you made it worth wild.

The story was hot and beautiful.
Thanks for sharing

Oh my gosh, this was so amazingly hot! Seriously! OOh Please Make more stories of this couple. :-)

This was so hot! I loved it, fantastic job ;)

A really good story !

Please write more Alvon, you're great at writing it and I'm not sure if you take requests but could you please write a story where Alvin is dying and Simon comforts as he goes

Consider it the request of a dying man
Sincerely a dying fan

I...

I have no idea what to say. Rarely do I find a lemon this good and this enjoyable to read.

This is one of the best things I've read!

This is so amazing, I really like submissive alvin I think he is adorable and dominant Simon is sexy, the sex scene is well written and seems to flow smoothly and overall fantastic! I love this pairing;)

Great Work!
This is one of the best AlvinxSimon stories.
Really great work you two!
Congratulations!

Great job you two! I'm so happy to see you posting more content.

Those sex scene... I love how you write them. They never seem rushed and everything always flows nicely. I have a hard time being able to write detailed scene with dialogue because the dialogue ends up over powering the actions, so much applause to you.

I personally like Simon being submissive, but none the less I still enjoyed it. (I thoroughly enjoy Simon's personality in A Little Misunderstanding and The Little Things. I defiantly want to see more stories like that.)

Great job guys!