Just wanted to drop in and say I love this fic!? I stayed up yesterday all night reading it and it was so long and I had to stop at some part just to savor them? The plot is amazing. The angst is everything. Even the writing style is motherfucking great! The world-building seems like nothing less than perfection (I couldn’t stop cringing when John was reading handbook to slavery part? I mean the way you showed the massive propaganda in this new world view) ok so just amazing.
I love how you even show parts of Sherlock’s childhood to see what has made him the person that he is today and how that will be affecting his relationship with John.
This right here I gotta tell ya mate it’s some good shit

Nicely done...I see by the reviews that there was quite a dry spell there when you didn't have an update. I really hope that you are on a roll again and will update soon. I am really enjoying your story and writing style. I'm anxious to see what will happen next! :)

No I can't belive it..is the update real or am I dreaming

I know you havent update in years but you dont understand how good this story is. The dynamic is perfect. Just the right amount of action, flashbacks and dialogue. Agh! I just loved it. Please. Id sell myself for another chapter!

I actually found this two years ago (really can't believe it's been so long!) and have really just been kind of watching it from a distance, but I have to say that this is my absolute favorite slave fic. I love the interesting and believable interactions between John and Sherlock here, the shifts in their dynamic and each of them getting used to the situation and each other. The one thing I don't like as much is the sex, simply because it isn't what I'm looking for, but of course, this isn't my story. If anything, I only hope that it doesn't turn into a smutfest with the characters' relationship suddenly becoming rainbows and butterflies after they have sex for the first time, because I would hate to see such a beautiful character dynamic go. I want to keep seeing their occasional struggles and shifts in power, as you have been beautifully writing them up to this point. I would love to see more of this, yuor writing is amazing!

wait wait wait... English isn't your first language!? Okay my opinion of us English speaking has hit a new low...This grammar and writing structure is very well done. It flows. Keep up the great work

That was a very good update. This story is marvelleous:))) Thanks.

Wow! I'm loving this. It is heartbreaking in all the right ways.

I have to admit that I hope you are planning to keep in gen - there just aren't enough gen slavery stories out there.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

This chapter made me cry! :'(

Very well written as always, I found both the flash back and the present time parts to be entertaining and would love to read more about sherlock's adjustment to slavery with his first owner. Hope to read more soon

This is so good it's scary:)

The idea that a slave should be honored to be his master's slave and sex toy is nauseating.

Wow, your description of the boys being sold into slavery had my stomach in knots. I can't say I'm enjoying this (because of the subject matter), but it's definitely grabbed my attention.

Great chapter, per usual. I really wanted to hate John after reading this chapter, but I just couldn't. Loved the interaction between Mycroft and Sherlock in this update, and glad he's a little more concerned (outwardly) than he seems to be in the show. And that ending...yeesh, so sad. Hope you update soon.

Wow, really great chapter. As much as I like him, this is the first time I've reeeeeeeally hayed John.