One chapter is repeated. I think it's chapter two and chapter four? Anyway, I really love this! Chapter eleven and chapter 9 are so sad though. Thanks so much for writing! Or maybe it wasn't chapter 9... I think it was. Ah, reading all of that in one go, things get a little mixed up.

I died with the last one please write more, this is the best, I love how you write them and how they interact especially at comic con or in their normal day lives, it's beyond adorable, thanks for writing you made my day! I can't wait to read more.
-Whomever