Reviews for Kur Returns
creativesm75 chapter 16 . 8/15/2019
Good fanfic. I liked both endings.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2019
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acrisafu chapter 13 . 12/13/2018
Holy Shit! I love the turn this took I'm not gonna lie (I tend to love stories that don't have a happy ending). Also...I kinda forgot what was happening so I had to go back and read read every thing lol
phantomkitty7 chapter 12 . 8/29/2016
This story is amazing! Please keep updating.
creativesm75 chapter 12 . 6/6/2016
nice.
acrisafu chapter 12 . 6/5/2016
Yayy! Got home from work and saw there was an update :D I feel so honored that this was dedicated to me :)
Great chpaters btw! So they knew he still had his powers? Is that what they were discussing?
Anyway, hope you update again soon!
acrisafu chapter 11 . 5/22/2016
Oh man this is really really good! I know it's been a while but any plans on continuing this? I sure hope so!
shiloh chapter 9 . 10/14/2015
I get your gist but you need to make your writing more clear.
shiloh chapter 8 . 10/14/2015
what happened to Doyle? Zon and Zak are fine, but somethings off about Doyle. I really like the adieu.
shiloh chapter 7 . 10/14/2015
we have no evidence that kur lied and manipulated except with zaks lessons with arghost. also, when did Kur begin debating with zak? does it have to do with the gem? if you do not have an explantion for this then just leave the dreams.
shiloh chapter 6 . 10/14/2015
new cryptid. don't repeat yourself that close together.
shiloh chapter 5 . 10/14/2015
spread out your vocab, and tweak the characters a little more. Zak is on track but you need to fix the others. Also why would Zon stay with Doyle after defeating Arghost?
shiloh chapter 1 . 10/14/2015
minor errors in wording and writing.
EpicKiya chapter 11 . 10/11/2015
This chapter is worth the wait!
Guest chapter 10 . 4/25/2015
Love it.
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