please write some more. it's good.

Actually I'm a bit confused. When Shinji said Atobe got amnesia and forgot Echizen,why you didn't explain about that. I mean I want to know how Atobe get accident. But naaah I just wanna dead more chapter. So please don't leaving this story...
Pretty please with sweety pai Keigo chan. Give you virtual cookies.

To the person who was bashing Yukimurra decision, this a positive thing. Even if you have a criticism, please be polite. It's their fanfiction. Not yours.

I hate that you've made Yukimura Seiichi, as a villain. And actually think that Yukimura is a far nobler character than many believe. Actually, I have to say, I hate when authors, dirty a character, just to create a story.
I've seen these cases, many fandums and find it really annoying.
I think many authors, they would have to rethink before writing a Fanfics, because I think that is disrespectful towards the characters and professional authors, getting dirty his characters.
Please do not be offended, I say just expressing my opinion on this particular subject.
Likewise I wish you success in your story, but I will not continue reading.

(sorry my English is bad, I'm using google translator because I am not an expert in the language.)

MORE! waaaah...i really love this one soooooo much! hehehe...

Update soon! Cant wait to see their reaction when they know about Echizen's unable to play tennis!

Yay for the new chapter! Loving it! Thanks so much and keep going

whoohoo thank for a good chapter.

I think the people think that the second chapter went too fast, just want a long story. Here are my opinion if you don't want to delete anything than have Atobe and Echizen go out than Atobe cheats again and make that one last, or delete the second chapter and rewrite it something like Echizen slam the door before Atobe say anything.

Original

Hmm... It's up to you then. If there are so many people likes the original chapter, you didn't have to rewrite it. I hope you just keep writing because I want to know the end of this story *smiles*

It's look really ok for me already (this chapter) nut I suggest the scene when Ryoma got injure and the story continue with Seigaku_
hope to see next chapter

Just because you got a comment that it went too fast doesn't mean you have to edit it. Consider it as a character trait of the great "Ore-sama", who gets what he wants with the snap of his fingers. As for Seigaku and the rest, you can drag it out and it will be just fine. I loved the original chapter 2 flowed! :)

I'm sure the update will be better then the last. Look forward to seeing it.

Oh well, I thought that Ryoma will be mad to Atobe for a long time. And yes, for Seigaku too. But, WHY?! That's really a short time! You made me crying so hard in the first chapter, but now? *sigh* I... I don't know what to say.