| Reviews for The Unholy Family |
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Guest chapter 8 . 10/5/2014 Poor Lucrezia |
sadi chapter 8 . 10/5/2014 Oh I love this . So much ache , sadness (the "God is with me now , Cesare " part is my favorite part ), sweetness ... I hope you will continue it . Please don't stop it. |
sadi chapter 7 . 5/9/2014 Short but great Lucrezia what is going to happen to her ? I am worried and curious. Canon plot or not ? I hope you will update as soon as you can. |
sadi chapter 6 . 3/28/2014 I am very curious to see how you are going to write things from here. Beautiful descriptions and details. I can't wait for chapter 7. |
eridani chapter 6 . 3/30/2014 Wow, quick update! Lucrezia's anger was very nicely done. While she might have cultivated her own cunning later in life, I think she was abused abominably by her father as a bargaining chip at this stage, and you've really emphasised that here. Good job picking up on the tension around Cesare not fighting harder to delay her entry to matrimony. Thanks! |
eridani chapter 5 . 3/25/2014 Beautifully written! The tension between the siblings seems very promising and you've depicted the odd mix of filial love and possession that characterises their relationship so well. Hope to see updates to this, as it looks like it will be a real success :-) |
sadi chapter 5 . 3/17/2014 Rodrigo is harsh indeed. The way Lucrezia and Cesare are drawn to each another is so intense.I love the dance scene. Please keep up with it. |
sadi chapter 4 . 3/9/2014 Those Lucrezia Cesare 's scenes from early season 1... such innocence and pure love. I really like details like Cesare playing with one of her hair " so it looks like a ring " for example. More please. |
sadi chapter 3 . 3/6/2014 When Cesare gets angry at her it seems odd a little bit but they quickly make up and i like them together. I am curious about the following. |
sadi chapter 2 . 3/6/2014 Vanozza / Lucrezia quality time. |
sadi chapter 1 . 3/6/2014 The iconic , beautiful first Lucrezia and Cesare scene : always a pleasure to get back to it. You depict it well. |
Gefionne chapter 3 . 3/5/2014 Keep this one coming! It's quite grand! |