I have chewed my kneecaps off. This is disgusting.

Whoa! This was so hot! I really love Braeburn as an Uke. I think he's just so adorable and cute. I'm sure Big Mac just couldn't help himself. I LOVED IT! Awesome story!

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I demand sequels! Anyway great little story. You got the hot sex writing down better then most lol

I liked this story, especial at the end.
But I thin it would have been better if the story was to continue on with Apple Jack.
I would be pleased if I could finish the story.

I love southern hotness, I really do.

FINISH YOUR POKEMON HAREM STORY ITS SO GOOD BEEN WAITING 2 TO 3 MONTHS

Uh oh spoiler alurt, although nor this univers nor the orientation are my favourite subjects i got to say it was very good, i say keep up the good work