I love how everyone is blaming everyone except the bitch who cheated on him. Everyone in the comment section, I truly hope you all die. Your mothers will b sucking a crackhead's dick in no time.

The fic is great. The characterization is right on target. I hope someday that you will write another OMG fic.

This an amazing story the way Belldandy is driven towards rape, murder and madness,almost gore, I must say that to really enjoy this; OMG's fans have to get rid of the concept of Belldandy's behavior in the manga if not, you will stop every paragraph and say "she would not do that"; and you will be right most of the times, but hey! It's a Fanfic, NObody forces you to read it.

This was an amazing story. It's so nice to see stories break characters out of their canon-induced stereotypes, when done well like this. Thank you for a fantastic read!

okay bell is really creeping me out now im a go hide now, and excelent job on te story

The original might as well end like this... man i hate unfinished works.

Isn't peorh Angel called "Gorgeous Rose"?

Once again i hope no one dies in the end.

But there is no way thing are going to end well.

Since this fic is already completed i can't make request but i would like to see Keichi came out on top. and regarding their relationship, i could not care less, since those too share one, if not the most idiotic love in anime history.

Come on how many time have they kiss... One in the manga, and i think another one in the movie... and i think that's it they confess their love for each other ages ago and nothing has happened and i think nothing will.

I just hope this dont turn in a soap opera(how do you spell "telenovela" in inglish)

Love the show.

Besides some grammatical errors, no body is perfect (not even Belldandy) this story is outstanding. I feel that characterizations were accurate, maybe towards the edge but still reasonable. Yes this is dark (so times to realistic) but very good. The Manga/Anime are sometimes too sweet, this story is closer (I feel) to reality. From my personal life I have seen something this innocent lead to what happened in the end (minus the divine power).

Mara's plan would have worked on so many levels. Even if Bell & Kei got past the incident, the doubt and betrayal would mar their relationship from that point on. Keiichi would have to face the fact that it all was his fault for acting like a grade boy with a crush instead of realizing he was involved with a woman who needed to be needed, physically and emotionally.

Belldandy's punishment and reassignment was a good touch. Her reaction to the punishment and Peorth's being assigned as her replacement would have driven her to the edge. Her jealousy storms (as seen in the Manga/Anima) could have led to her actions.

Everyone else's actions, I felt, were so real. Urd drinking to hide from the truth, Skuld refusal to ever see her sister as less then perfect, and Peorth, whose love for Kei was as strong as Belldandy's, proving her love by being a friend then a lover to him. Let us not forget Meigumi, her reaction to Bell's betrayal of her big brother was accurate, she would have beaten Belldandy to a pulp if they had ever met again.

The only comment/improvement (wish you would have done is) is 'Where is Lind'? I could have seen her delivering the final/fatal stroke at the end. She considered Kei her closet friend,and fellow warrior. She would have done anything, including killing Belldandy, to protect Kei and creation.

This is an excellent story! Aside from the grammatical errors, I kind of want to see what happens with Peroth n' K1, also Skuld and Urd.

Aside from the grammatical errors, I loved it. :)

Some of the sentences seem incomplete and others placed in odd ways. The fic was dark as promised and I must say, you wrote it well. I'm sad that belldandy fell but relieved that keiichi will heal and move on. Good work and good luck to you and your future stories.

You weren't kidding when you said this was a dark fic. I liked it anyways, the writing was well done.

Thanks for the great story!

Aedan

Belldandy, while drunk on Coca Cola, once said that, given the choice, between saving the world Keiichi, she'd save Keiichi.

This was a wonderful tangent to that aspect of her character, a rare glimpse of the contrast that must exist in Belldandy, but also keeps her love for Keiichi intact to the reader. He's all she wants. He is her world, regardless of what she becomes.

Merci beaucoup. I felt privileged to read such a well-done story on the possibilities of what might happen when the Good goes Bad in desperation.

I'd ask for a sequel depicting Peorth and Keiichi... but somehow, I'm satisfied with this ending. That's a rare thing.

Thanks again.

Masterfully executed and overall beautiful.