| Reviews for The Fine Line |
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  Guest chapter 60 . 9/1/2017 Has the idiot not heard of being "screwed over" in relation to: buying a car, buying property, credit cards where the interest jas been jacked, when your satellite bill continues to go up, being passed over for a job in favor of some jerk just because he is a guy, and I have so many other things that term can apply to... Qoheleth must be a religious nut to think they are all that and a bag of chips, too. That person seriously needs to get a new perspective today's phrasing if they are stuck in the 1930's that bad. Will read on the Archive since the zealots seem to be overrunning this one. See you there! |
 tanseynz chapter 60 . 9/3/2017 Disappointed a self-elected troll is whining about your fine story instead of minding his own business. Imo jealous of a fine talent, at a guess. Great story, interesting twists and turns, and the plotting was well done. You rock! |
| tanseynz chapter 6 . 9/2/2017 Was a bit doubtful reading the blurb, but after five chapters, I'm hooked! All my questions so far have been answered and I get the whole thing. Pavel is not just engaging but his feelings towards his erstwhile colleagues and their hasty treatment of him are exactly how I felt reading them. Great story so far! |
| WildChild2014 chapter 60 . 9/1/2017 Oh, for goodness sake, my sainted mother used that phrase. Some people need to get a life. |
| macberly chapter 60 . 9/1/2017 Seriously!? Some people need to get a life! I looked for WolvesandFae on AO3 but it was not coming up! Ugh! I hope all works out! |
| Qoheleth chapter 1 . 8/30/2017 Dear Fae: Tiny thing, but - would you really call that summary K-rated? Sincerely, Qoheleth |
| ThatOneGingerKid chapter 59 . 7/26/2016 I read this all in one go and I love it so, so much! :D |
| Crimson cat angel chapter 59 . 6/19/2016 Love |
| drew chapter 59 . 9/7/2015 awww! that was cute |
| Maudlin Mush chapter 59 . 6/8/2015 Excellant! I loved your story (as you continued it)/. I hope to read your work again! |
| Taboo22 chapter 59 . 6/8/2015 wonderful end |
| macberly chapter 58 . 5/30/2015 It's not! It's not! Pavel needs to be on the Enterprise! The family needs to be together! Noooo! This can't end! |
| Laonhana Avery chapter 58 . 5/26/2015 Hearts and sugar for the story..! |
| Maudlin Mush chapter 57 . 5/13/2015 yikes! trouble in paradise. or on the Enterprise. I can see why Pavel is so worried. Even though he was a child prodigy, he learned to deal with the 'less intelligent'. I look forwards to your solution! I hope that real life calms down for you. I quite understand how it can impinge on writing! (*snicker*) Thank you for the update. |
| Maudlin Mush chapter 1 . 4/26/2015 oh darn, Sulu ruined it! Kirk sure is a nosey booger! Thanks for the update! I love how you write the characters. |
