You have been gone for years and will likely not return... I still keep checking though. :,( That aside, thanks for the storie you did complete. I loved it.

UPDATEE PLSS! COME BACKK :((
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This is rlly a good hidan x oc thats not cringy-

AUTHOR SAAAAN *SCREECH*

sksksk i ship them :

hope there will be more soon because i love this one and it would be a shame for it to be abamdoned like so many great fics ive read

I love this so far

Plz update this, it's really good.

Hi! I just came here from reading your other fanfic, Clearing Mist, and I must say your writing style and stories have me hOoKeD.

I’m sure that I and a ton of other fans of yours would love and appreciate you possibly updating after —practically— four years. If you have time and haven’t forgotten this story or account of course.

xx

read your other story and absolutely loved it! and now I start a new one only to find it incomplete with a "next time" that's leaving me drooling for more. that's cold blooded. love it hope for more eventually!

aaaaAAAAHAAAAAAAAAAAAA ,_, pls update I love this storyyyyy

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please please please update please

Please say that you will update soon?

Please please please please please find it in your heart to update. From the preview you seem to have an idea or part of the next chapter already written lol seriously though this is amazing and it would be an absolute crime against humanity to not finish it.

Hello wonderful writer could you please keep writing this story or write other stories. Please you are by far my favorite writer not just in fan-fiction but in all the books and storys i have read ( i read a lot ) so could you please keep writing please. If I'm feeling mean maybe I'll just keep bugging you till you continued to write. If you have a busy life then could you at least wrap up the story even if it is rushed (everyone dies.) So please please please write some more ( I would like more naruto fanfic but it is up to you). I've been waintiing for like a year now and read both story like 21 times and I love them so please.

PLEASE READ WHAT I WROTE

I love this story almost as much as I've enjoyed reading and re-read Clearing Mist, which is saying something considering how there's nine chapters and how many times I've read Clearing Mist! I can't wait for the rest, if you plan on continuing it! Keep up the great work, you're an incredible author! :D

- Mari-Lou -

No! I've just been binji-reading your fics, Clearing Mist throughout the entire day, (Fantastic story may I add, I couldn't stop reading... and I didn't until coming to the last chapter!) and now this fic has taken my focus! ... Only to stop at chapter nine...

I find that you're stories have this originality to it, that most authors don't have.

With Clearing Mist, you had it go very AU, something which most Insert-Characters don't do, (AKA lets join team7 and follow the plot nearly exactly.) Despite having it go "AU" you managed to make if follow a Canon line, (Because manga/anime knowledge is hax.) I really adored how you had the characters try to REPLACE events, not IGNORE or COMPLETELY CHANGE them. While they tried to fix the people dying aspect, they also knew that some things needed to happen.
(It was something that I was fascinated with while reading your fic.)

Then with this story, It was equally as easy to fall victim to another of your stories. It's really interesting how you've set up this so that Hidan is brought back into the picture several years after the initial story. Usually I stay clear from, "several years later" stories, but this one is a lot different from the usual ones. Mainly because its this balance between, "Next gen." (Not really any new gen characters, but you get what I mean... I think.) and "Canon story."

I noticed that you said in your review to Arcami, that the story is following Canon, did you just mean that the background is Canon, or that the plot somewhat follows something that happened in the actual Manga/Anime.

Also, if you don't mind me asking, why is this story in Hiatus? (Basically I just want to know if it was because you were just finishing up Clearing Mist, or if its more long term because of real life or writers block?)

Anyways, thank you for writing these amazing stories, I've enjoyed them a lot, and I appreciate that you shared them with everyone on Fanfic.