Love it update soon

Just came across this story and I love it!:)
This story has so much potential!:)
I can’t wait for the next update!:)
UPDATE SOON!:):):):):):)):):):):):):)

Please please please update soon I really want to know what happens next this is a great story I absolutely love the originals it is my favourite tv show of all time. The storyline is so amazing I need to read more!

I am very interested in the story, though I would love it if the cousins get to meet their parents soon, it would be quite of a whirlwind! Keep up the great work and please update soon!

Update please

Good Job! I am eager to see where you plan to take this story! Will you line your story up with event in the TV show? It would be interesting to see them travel to New Orleans as an outcome of what Millie hears from her Werewolf friend! Just something to consider! Otherwise, keep up the good work! Hope to see another update very soon!

Love this keep it coming

I have to say that this story isn't up to date with the actual TV series, as every firstborn child from the Mikaelson line is hunted down by Dahlia. Unless your not caught up up with the show, I think you should include Dahlia into the story somewhere or add more to the summary of the story.
Also, when Eliana was introduced to her father, why didn't she tell him who she was? Does she not want Elijah to know who she is?

I want to give some constructive criticism about why you lost me as a reader on the first chapter ( as I'm assuming you lost a few readers becuase of this as well.) when you write down profiles and descriptions for characters it makes people believe you are unable to show it within the story and thats why you write it down. There is no need for personality or physical descriptions in profiles when you can subtly do it within the very story. I don't think I've ever read a book ( and I've read many) in which the first chapter consists of character descriptions in a profile , have you? The author has to be capable of integrating it successfully in the story or not at all. The first chapter only causes readers to doubt your capability as an author. This is all said with the best of intentions, I promise. I hope you give it some thought. Thanks.

Like it

i should have asked this before but are you going to tell us how Millie can be both like Klaus is like did she die then kill someone because i thought that you had to be turn the same way or by Klaus? but other then that i love it i hope you write more.

Come on let elijah meet his daughter!

Can't wait to see Elijah's reaction. I'm imagining a picture of the shock Elijah in my head. :)

Good start. Interesting plot. I can't wait to find out.

LOVE IT! I love the fact that you added the children of the other Originals! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!