BRAVO!
BRAVO!
Such a great story! Easy to plow through, with casual grammar that needs no twice thinking, great character developement, and an actual sensible happy ending. Simply fucking amazing.

I cannot thank you enough for bringing this masterpiece to life. I simply must say that this piece of work is amazing. This is corny as hell, but really, no other story, fanfic or not, has touched me this deeply.

You are one talented bastard, I'll give you that. This fandom is like none I've ever seen. From my knowledge, the fandom had toxic edges during the show's run. What I see now, years too late into this, is that there's nothing left but actual good people with God-tier dedication and impossibly rooftop-high talent in their works, including you.

You sir, made my entire holiday. I can't thank you enough for your talents.

P.S. Do you have sketches of how the characters might look like? I'm really curious of what they would look like according to you, since I dont think my headcanon is bringing them justice. The whole nine yards, if there are, like Seth, Amaryllis, Iron, Mist, and maybe even the Oppressed types. Especially the Oppressed, I just can't get my head around what they're supposed to look like.

Fuck damn that chapter ending is GLORIOUS!

Haha! Salamul x Chrysalis!

I can already imagine a HoI4 mod scenario of this haha!

I will put my foresight here and say it's Amaryllis. Sombra probably cooked up another spell to hit her, and a complete one that places here right when he wants it, not 3000 years into the future

Bra-fucking-vo!
I'd give you more standing ovation than what Beethoven had ever received if I have to!

You have a way with words! Grace within grammar! I just can't believe how great this entire thing is!

You have the potential to make a bestseller if you do so desire, that's how good this is.

This turned into Silent Hill and I love every word you had written!

I'd say Rainbow Dash is the x'th incarnation of Amaryllis, and I stand final!

The heart of stone melts bit by bit. This story is fantastic so far!

Rip...
...and Tear!

Think about it, if you go home, you will arrive in time where Sombra will inevitably kill off the entire human race anyways. There's no point in going back, like damn. You might love Amaryllis but what's the point of going back for what is at best a week before the inevitable happened?

(I know this is finished I just like to make rational decisions in pre-hindsight)

For the longest time, only now I realize Canterlot is a parody of Camelot. I know of Manehattan, Stalliongrad, and such, but Canterlot only snapped on me today.

Jesus in a handbasket, that's some crazy ptsd crap. I just wish he would just break down and cry until he feels better though.

This is one of the best worded depression realization i have ever seen. I'm not a feels guy, but your wordings man, they make so much sense in such easy language. I managed to shed an entire tear, and that is something. I'm honestly impressed, you made an entire "that one therapy session where the depressed guy finally clicked something over".

I'm almost ditching this story like I had with that one with Navarone guy because both are pretty cynical and spiteful, but damn, at least Seth is finally fighting the uphill battle, even when he needs someone to push his ass above enemy fire. Now I'm interested to see where this is going.

Just reading it for the memes.