| Reviews for The Girl Who Wasn't There |
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Terri Hooker chapter 18 . 5/7 I just found this story and love it. So sad that it hasn't been updated for so long, but I really wanted to say how much I enjoyed what is written |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/21/2019 Brittany is right! Telling that you know their future is stupid. I saw her dead comming snce the begining of the episode. I mean the grup is not that paranoic in this point but telling that the hell they are living is created by the imagination of a random guy? That wont work well for any of them |
Guest chapter 18 . 6/16/2019 So cool! Wish you had updated. Though it has been quite the years. 5 years... loved the history though. |
doubletwoa chapter 6 . 11/25/2018 Andrea sister's name is also Amy... |
ILoveYouAuthor chapter 1 . 6/14/2018 This story is yet to be completed, but it accurately represents what would happen in those circumstances, an extra 2 characters in The Walking Dead. The wording is superb, and leaves you wanting more. 13/10 |
myharlequinromance321 chapter 18 . 6/22/2017 Wow, I think I read at least part of this story once before, but ended up losing the tab or something. I really like this and hope you wand and/or are able to continue it. Thank you for writing this and best of wishes to you. |
Than-Guan'Rose chapter 10 . 5/1/2017 I hope Carl doesnt die! hes an important Character! |
Neo KizuNii chapter 18 . 1/29/2017 wow I really like that you are changing the plot it's more interesting like that. I don't like that Brittany maybe has a sickness that makes her too weak. couldn't it just have something to do with her being ill because she's from another universe and it goes away after a few weeks? that would be nicer. it would be cool if she would use her knowledge more also I think you have forgotten something important. when she first came to the world of twd and met daryl, she said his name which she could not have known before she passed out. maybe this is something that should be a topic in the future. also it would be cool if shane would live long enough to fight the Gouverneur but he is pretty bad and insane and I still don't like him. I hope Brittanys past will be revealed and she tells the group where she really came from that would be awesome. By the way, I would like to read more fluff and growing romance between her and daryl And I want to tell you that this story is really awesome I like it. I hope you'll continue soon and won't abandon this wonderful fanfiction. so have fun while writing and stay awesome! bye bye |
TheMudMonkey chapter 18 . 1/6/2017 This is a really cool story. I can't wait to know what happens next! |
mostly a reader fangir99 chapter 18 . 12/4/2016 Love your story cant wait to read what happens next |
Guest chapter 18 . 11/30/2016 I would love to see Shane go against the Governor! He's not afraid to fight dirty to win, especially when it's his family on the line. He would totally do it smart and stand out the road leaving Woodbury and snipe the Governor instead of waiting. Or if the whole truce meet-up with the Governor and Rick happens, he'd be smart enough to know that THAT would be the time to ambush him when he's away from the safety of Woodbury's walls and with only a few men. He's proactive, not reactive. Yeah, some people would call that being hot-headed, but honestly, his way will keep more people alive. If you're just reacting to other people's actions, people will die. I think he would also be quick to shoot Tomas and maybe even all 5 of the prisoners when they find them (sorry Axel and Oscar!). If you remember, Tomas pulls out his gun right after they amputate Hershel's leg ad he threatens the group back in Cell Block C. Shane would nope the fuck out of that right away and shoot him. Cops are trained to do that if someone draws on them. Actually, it would be cool if Merle could live too. I know that he and Shane completely rubbed each other the wrong way at the Quarry, but I think if they met again after Shane has shed his straight-laced cop persona, they would totally play off of each other and get shit done! Not saying they'd be friends, but they're pretty similar. They would probably set up an ambush at the place the Governor wanted to trade Michonne at...not a solo suicide run like on the show, but a coordinated attack with at least half of the prison group and take the Governor out from a distance, easy peasy. Merle was a Marine, after all. But really, all of the things Shane does that seemed so violent and abrasive in Season 2 don't even touch the things Rick and his group have had to do since, so why not let him live? I agree with you: without the catalyst of him killing Otis, he won't fly off the handle and go crazy. Just please don't have him pant after Lori. Firstly, I think Rick is the only father that Judith should ever have. Secondly, Shane is the type of person who needs someone just as fiery and independent as he is. I'm not a Lori hater like a lot of people on here, but I don't think she and Shane would have meshed well long-term. If not Andrea, I could TOTALLY see him with Sasha! He and Sasha are calculating and pragmatic, but passionate...actually, know that I hunk about it, it would also be cool to see Sasha with Merle. I think I could see it! Will Otis live? If you're gonna save people, he'd be a good one. He's a hunter, so more meat for the group, and a volunteer EMT so you know he's delivered some emergency births in his time. Also, with Brittany's foreknowledge, will things with the Governor happen sooner or later? Will they find the prison sooner too? And since she knows where Merle is, will she try to reunite him and Daryl before Mere gets too entrenched in Woodbury? If you remember from the show, Merle admits he never killed anyone before the apocalypse and really only did it because the Governor said too. And he wasn't a rapist and would never hit a woman or child. So it's not like he was an all-out bad guy. If she somehow finagles meeting him instead of Glenn and Maggie, she could bring him back! Never liked that Glenn refused to in the first place. Glenn left Merle to die trapped on the roof-Merle had MUCH less reason to trust Glenn in my opinion. Now that I think about it, maybe Shane is the one Brittany should tell about the future. He's already suspicious about her, but I hunk he's the one who would make the best use out of the future knowledge. |
Sevvus chapter 18 . 11/23/2016 lol tents, they should be pretty straight forward but they never are! I understand T's pain... XD |
SilverSnow chapter 18 . 11/17/2016 I am loving Brittany's character. She's bonding well with the group. Hope they find carl soon. |
Vertigo Venom chapter 18 . 11/17/2016 I just came across this story and I gotta say I'm loving it! I'm glad to see that Carl is alive but it really sucks that it was the Govenor's men that found him. I hope Brittany's health issue isn't to serious. Should Shane live past season 2? Not really sure but it would be interesting to see him go toe to toe with the Govenor. Maybe Brittany can change his fate in some way or at least postpone it for awhile? Either way keep up the amazing work your doing and update again soon please! - V.V. |
Katenka chapter 17 . 11/13/2016 Oh, I can't say how surprised I was to get a notification for this story. I'm so happy to know you're getting back to it. Had to re-read it again, still amazing, still love it. I can't wait to know what's going on with Brittany's health. It doesn't seem that Daryl took it very well. Wonder what's going through his head about it. ;u; Shane scares me seen as he is crazy. Welp. |