This is hilariously well written; well done! Can't wait to read more!

A nice start to a fic. I don't know if you plan to continue but what you have here was highly enjoyable. If you do still want an idea for "start", maybe you could use "wait" or "pause".

Please continue

I am going to make a one-shot based off of this, but in the PokeSpe form. hope you don't mind

I simply think "bird jesus" should be something like "B.J."

Ooh, interesting. I don't even want to take the time to log in before reviewing. I love the idea! The hivemind voices needed to come from somewhere afterall. This is probably my favorite interpretation so far! Please keep it up!

Jaysnow-Silverblaze

This is quite good. I love the idea that The Mob is a Spiritomb. I'd love it if you updated again.

I'm loving how you've characterized The Mob. There's so many incidents in the far future that I can't wait to see in prose form: the introduction of democracy, followed by the Start9 Riot and voting; The Mob arguing about Vaporeon VS Lapras; Bloody Sunday, followed by Operation Shoot For The Moon; The Mob's growing fear of PCs, culminating in Red walking into a room full of PCs in Cinnabar Pokémon Lab and The Mob going "NONONONONONO"; The Mob screeching "GET WRECKED!" during the Elite Four; The Mob going ballistics during the Dragonslayer incident... so many great moments, so far in the future. I hope you don't lose interest in this fic before that.

This story is so great! It's the most amusing (and oddly believable) reasoning behind Red's actions in the Poké-verse during Twitch Plays Pokémon.

Also, I'm sorry if it makes me seem noob-ish, but I don't really understand how making all of Red's Pokémon faint would weaken Spiritomb's control of Red. Could you, perhaps, explain that in the "Author's Notes" in your next chapter?

And about Spiritomb: why did you specify that Spiritomb has only 108 spirits/voices? Is that particular number somehow relevant to the story or did you just want to pick a specific number to represent all of the Twitch users that were inputting commands?

I liked how the Spiritomb spirits would talk to each other, though, and sometimes ignore Red (even though their voices were a little difficult to read). Also, are you actually nicknaming Pigeot "Savor" (like you wrote) or were you trying to say "Savior"? I would be amused if some of the Spiritomb spirits called Pigeot "Bird Jesus" or "Saviour" or something similar and worshiped the Helix fossil/Lord Helix and spoke of the evil that is the Dome fossil (much to Red's dismay, lol).

I can totally believe the Spiritomb inclusion as cannon for TPP. I really want to know more about why Red was the chosen one to be implanted with Spiritomb's odd keystone, who was responsible for implanting the keystone into him, and what they expected to happen to him after they implanted the keystone. I know that Team Rocket does genetic experiments on Pokémon, so it would be believable if they were the ones behind this, but Spiritomb's keystone was from Sinnoh, so maybe it's another evil group altogether that is administering this experiment on Red. They said they would watch Red, as well, so that makes me wonder about their purpose even more. I hope we get to find out sometime in the future of your story who implanted Spiritomb's keystone into Red and why they did it (even though it wouldn't exactly follow what happened in TPP).

TL;DR : Sorry for the long review. I really like where this story is going and I do hope you continue writing. I didn't see many errors in the writing, either, so that's pretty good. Keep up the great work! :D

lol, red is in for an adventure of a lifetime. Also, the spirittomb attachment to red to represent all the people on twitch was brilliant thinking on your part

This is promising to be awesome! I am kind of dissapointed, though, about the fact that out 30.000 contingent of people got reduced to 108! XD

Well this is fun. I wonder what it will be like at the cliffs of doom, and when democrocy gets involved. Thanks for making and sharing.

That damn ledge...

I love the Spiritomb's talking. Just that.
NOOOO WHAT ARE YOU DOING NOW WE HAVE TO TRY AGAIN
Love it.

Oh god the ledges. The horror.