| Reviews for Two worlds |
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   Kaijucifer chapter 23 . 2/12 Sequel time! |
| incurser chapter 13 . 5/8/2017 Oh my god. I was horrified at "shattered pelvis"! Good job but fucking hell... |
| incurser chapter 11 . 5/8/2017 This is really starting to pick up. I really like this story. One thing g you could improve on is when you write someone speaking, you put it on another line. This makes it sooooo much easier to read. For example: "Hello?" I call out into the darkness. There's no reply. "Hellooooo?" "Welcome," Said an old, clearly deceitful voice. "Who are you?" For a few moments, there's no reply. "I. Am. Death." Apart from that, there's nothing else that I can see wrong. I wonder how the rest of this story will go... |
| Guest chapter 22 . 3/15/2017 Noooooo! Not Knight! |
| Firestar001 chapter 8 . 3/27/2015 Ooooh... so good. |
| Firestar001 chapter 5 . 3/27/2015 SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEETTT! |
| EnderKingDeathstone chapter 23 . 3/21/2015 Bout time ive been following this story for a year really love it |
| Guest chapter 23 . 3/18/2015 Ty for such a good fanfiction it was so good i couldnt stop reading i kept wondering what woud happen next and i cant wait for the sequel great job peace by by |
| Zoommerfish chapter 23 . 3/18/2015 I absolutely love this story its far from what the beggining was like, but man is it good! |
| Xx13deathsxX chapter 23 . 3/18/2015 TOMATO BOMBARDMENT! *throws 1 tomatoe* |
| Scarease chapter 23 . 3/17/2015 Yo so are you going to use my commander Malice or No? |
| Horizon Unsheathed chapter 22 . 3/14/2015 This is a very unique story and love how its written. I look forward chapters. Hope to see more stories like this. |
| MrAwsome71283 chapter 22 . 2/25/2015 wooooooo! You are the best! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2015 Lots and lots of misspalling. ( |
| Scarease chapter 22 . 2/9/2015 Yaaa a new chapter good job. |
