I really like the story you’re telling here. It's too bad you stopped writing it after 2 chapters! The drama is perfectly balanced.

Hmm... interesting. Where are you going with this one? Who’s at the door? I’d think it’d be Booth or Hannah but it would be good to find out for sure. There are a few spelling and grammar errors that a beta would help you with I am sure, but I like the plot idea overall.

Your spelling and grammar are atrocious! The story sucks

This is an interesting idea but you have a lot of spelling errors

please write some more. it's good.

Omg

Why was this not continued very refreshing love it.

I adore this please update! !:)

Don't you dare break Wendell's Heart, Love, continue plz

update! like a little hooked on your story! its really good!

Interesting concept. Look forward to seeing where you go from here.

I like where you are going with this story can't wait to see more,but change angular to Angela

Your story is great can't wait to read more.

good premise...would like to see where you go with it

It looks like it's going to be a very good story...continue please :)