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hzntc chapter 1 . 4/19 Damn. Love the subtlety of it all. Great conceptThis was beautifully tragic. |
cricketsnothollow chapter 1 . 4/13/2018 That made my heart squeeze. |
RavenWingDark chapter 1 . 12/1/2017 WOW. You say so much with so few words, and honestly, this story could have worked chronologically and longer, but this is so creative, it changes everything and its as much prose as it is a short story. |
chiwa chapter 1 . 11/6/2017 "mou yatty chan, why'd you break my door?" FRICK- BWHAHAHHAHAHAHAH- *choke* |
Mrs Bipolar chapter 1 . 2/10/2017 Aah, has sido capaz de condensar tanta tristeza en tan pocas palabras que te admiro. El formato es innovador, nunca he leído una historia como la tuya, y encuentro genial que hayas sido capaz de lograr que sea posible leer la historia desde el 15 al 0 y desde el 0 al 15, es decir, de modo normal y en modo reversa. Es incluso más triste hacer ambas, porque el 0, con su "Yato looks away" y el 15, con Hiyori encontrando la moneda de cinco yenes en su mano, son oraciones cortitas pero tan significativas que logran llegarte al corazón. Sinceramente, no sé cómo diablos Yato y Hiyori van a poder ser felices juntos. Él es un dios y por tanto no envejece, y la única manera de que estén juntos por siempre es que Hiyori muera y se convierta en un shinki, pero eso quiere decir que olvidaría todo su pasado. Entonces... es como imposible que sean felices y eso me rompe el corazón. Sin contar que Yukine y todos los demás también entran en la ecuación. Aunque amé tu fic con todas sus letras, deseo profundamente que el final no sea tan agridulce como lo logra ser este one-shot. Felicitaciones. Tus palabras fueron pocas y significaron muchísimo, no fue necesaria tanta verborrea para expresar lo que querías transmitir con tu fic —y eso, sumándole el formato de reversa, lo hizo perfecto. Se va a favoritos sin duda. Saludos~. |
heroesofolympus63 chapter 1 . 10/31/2016 This is beautiful. |
LotrHpHoo chapter 1 . 10/24/2016 I'm just going to curl up and cry for a while. Nope, don't mind me *sniff* |
BreadNotDead chapter 1 . 4/22/2016 Daaah the feels! Why you do this to my heart. ...Still, though, can't help but lol at Yato breaking down Kofuku's door. Ah, Yato, you dork. |
Singular Poisonous Ashes chapter 1 . 3/12/2016 My heart. Youve crushed it. (Kudos!) |
Round Box chapter 1 . 1/28/2016 NOOOOOOOOO. I read it once forwards, and thought "okay it's sweet I don't get why there are so many faves." I scrolled through the fandom for a bit and for some reason your ff stayed in my mind. Like a niggling sensation at the back of my head. So I went back, carefully read the "reverse-chronological order" and decided to try reading it backwards. ... THE FEELS. I GET IT NOW. AND I CRY. A LOT. IT'S SO GOOD BUT HEARTBREAKING. THANK YOU FOR COMING UP WITH THIS LITTLE MASTERPIECE, THE IDEA WAS AMAZING. |
imaloser223 chapter 1 . 1/15/2016 My heart-what have you done? |
Notacat the Cat chapter 1 . 1/12/2016 NOOOOOO MY EMOTIONS /DO NOT READ IT BACKWARDS/ REALITY TRAIN IS TOO DAMN MUCH |
KilllaKirika chapter 1 . 12/26/2015 Well, thanks so much for nearly making me cry. |
O f f beat chapter 1 . 12/16/2015 So well-written! The reverse order works beautiful here. I could feel the melancholy grow with each descending number. :( Poor Yato... Very creative, though. Thanks for sharing this gem! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2015 Thank you for breaking me heart ToT |