This is fantastic. Lumina and Hope talking should have definitely happened in LR, and you did it so well!

:3

You write Lumina so deliciously perfect. I love her both in this story and in game.

I ADORED this story! Every single ounce of it!

I've always loved Lumina since the first time I saw her and this story certainly doesn't disappoint :) Loved how you wrote her dialogues here; they are so in-character with her. Great job!

I loved the idea of Lumina in the game, and this fic reminds me of why. Really liked this.

cool story

I loved reading this interaction between these two.

I'm really liking this story! I do hope you will continue!

Ooooh. This is really well written. I can see this happening. The characters seem to be wonderfully in-character, too. Awesome work! :)

Oh, wow. What an interesting take on Hope's situation. I loved it! Gave me all kinds of squeezy feelings in my chest. And it was well written to boot! Bravo!

Dang that was good

I'm a bit stunned by how well you managed to write Lumina; I could hear her voice while I was reading this. This entire scene seriously could have been lifted straight from the game. Very well done. I'm really enjoying this whole fic a day thing you've got going on. I hope it keeps up! :)

That was very well written, now I REALLY want to read a continuation .

I found this story very interesting because it portrayed Hope as having a sort of out-of-body experience while watching "himself" interact with Lightning. I personally believe that Hope did have more of a hold on himself during his time in the Ark, while Bhunivelze was just watching everything Lightning said and did through him...though I suppose that was implied more strongly in the Japanese version of the game and not carried over as well in English. Either way, the concept is great. Also I love the way you wrote Lumina! She's become one of my favourite characters, and I believe that you captured her personality perfectly. Another great oneshot - please keep it up!