Reviews for Vertical Expression
elwren75 chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
:)
HarnGin chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
Nice Jack and Phryne fantasy. Personally, I can't figure out what's taking them so long! Thanks for writing. Should you decide to visit this world again, I'd be happy to read the result.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Delicious. We need more, please!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
To the reviewer who said we didn't have prohibition here - true, but up until the mid 1960s all public bars serving alcohol were required by law to close at 6pm, so any jazz clubs like the one in the story and the one Phryne visits on the show would potentially have been breaching this law.
Elizabeth chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
Very fun! They didn't have Prohibition in Australia, though. No need for a speakeasy.
teetee chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Interesting i would like to see more.
FiBeeN chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
That was good fun. Nice concept and light hearted but still sexy. Would definitely like to see more.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
PLEASE CONTINUE! I love how you paint Jack and Phryne here. Wonderful!
Pinkolina chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
Lovely story! Please keep writing!
roxyhart1 chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
I really enjoyed this - really lovely story, so Jack and Phryne. Thanks
BritishMidget chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
This is a great story and would lead perfectly into a chapter about the Windsor. Maybe we could find out that there is a crime there or a crime that led her to the club or something similar.
Please don't make this your last story. That would be a real shame.
RoseandThistle
xfphile chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
Oh, this was fun. I sincerely hope it isn't your last foray into the wonderful world of MFMM; you're very talented. Thanks for sharing!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
Such a lovely, saucy story. I hope this doesn't end up being your only foray into Jack and Phryne fiction.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
Oh yes please. There's a follow up chapter you're planning for this, right? M rated and really smutty?
PinkFairy23 chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
Loved it. I love the idea of them conducting an affair in secret, it just feels so right!