Love these story. I already was a big fan of your supernatural storys but a lil to shy to comment. Your work is exellent. You really fit the characters so well and you describe all so perfect. Also if u see that you really good with the different fandoms. Anyway i just rewatched hobbit so i read these and also some others. Totatly in love with how you write Thorin and Bilbo. Would love if you writte more of these fandom. Your my favourite athor

Wow. This gave me chills... I was completely unsure where this was going! Well done!

One question... When did Bilbo get whipped (when Azog said that there were scars on his back)? Did you make that up, or did that really happen? I don't remember it happening...

O_O. Oh my goodness. That was good!

I knew the company would make there in time to save them. I'm happy that they are able to talk to and tease each other. I really like this story.

I see that Sherlock reference

This was beautiful! Carry on! This is one of the best Hobbit stories I've ever read! Wow!

Yay for hurt/comfort sequels. Loved the Bilbo/Kili one and now this. It occurs to me, he was protective of the 'nephew' like Thorin was protective of his 'brother'. It fits too. You know... if you are still taking one shot ideas, try a semi continuation of these two and do Thorin/Kili's point of view of the spider attack/elves capture where they have no idea where Bilbo is. Fili and Kili losing their 'second uncle' and Thorin, after coming so far, fretting that the spiders succeeded in killing Bilbo when he wasn't there to protect him. I'm such a stickler for h/c and the relief when he shows up :D 10/10

I literally just puked in anticipation.
Like, a big, green, puddle.
All over my lap.
And this is my second time reading.

This is the second time I've read your story, and this paragraph always is just so heart-wrenching.

:D yay for finding an awesome story after its been written! I honestly couldn't help but grin at the arguments and gasp at the death! Seriously. I'm still smiling from that last part now! :D

omg omg omg omg
cant handle
this
this
nope
not
ready for
this
omg
omg
make
more
i
need
MORE

EHHHHHHHHHHH!What have you done! Oh my god, woman! What. Have. You. Done!?

This story is...it's... INCREDIBLE!
Oh dear lord, how did you even do this!? How!? HOW!?

Cute ending. Ttteeerrrrriiiiifffffyyyyiiiinnnnnggggggg the rest was though. (Shudders)

THAT SHERLOCK REFERENCE THOUGH
THAT ANGST THOUGH
Wow. That was awful to read. Not to say it wasn't good, and well-written, and enjoyable, but MAN. That was /awful/.

As the sadic I am, I loved thsi story, Azog in these best days ! Very good work !