I liked your plot. It is a very unique story. Not tge same old C$A
Ty!
Julia

I just saw this story and I really appreciate the story line. I thought it was a bit more realistic as to how Ana should have been in the books! Would have loved to seen the pov from the entire Grey camp, especially Elliott. Thanks!

your not christian and ana so why is it under such

I liked your story very much. I love it when Ana finds someone who not only loves her but also RESPECTS her. :D

Remy is the worst name. Might as well name him runt lol like he would stand a chance against fifty too

Just found this story and wanted to let you know that I enjoyed it. Some minor cliffies at the end, but I'm sure I can manage to imagine something for their ending.

loved the story so much it was refresing . You played Christians stalkery from the original searies werry well in your own. loved reading it so big thank you.

I just found your story and loved it. I have to echo the sentiments of many of your readers. I hated the weak spineless Ana in the original series. I also thought Christian was hanging on by a thread. Thanks for your story

Oh thank god you took the time to write this! I just read the 50 shades books and I kept yelling at Ana to stop being such an idiot hoping that the book would somehow rewrite itself and stop being so annoying… and you made it come true! I'm the biggest fan of this 'new voice' you've put into Ana's head, it's certainly the only one of her imaginary friends that appears to have common sense.
So anyway, I'm going to keep reading this and hope it continues to be as good as the first chapter! Have a nice day, and ignore any whiny 50 shades fans that post reviews dissing this fic, you've done humanity a great service!

Lol that was actually really good. I loved the re my character n Christian. Just Christian, don't know what to do its you. I want to know what he'll do when he gets out. .
Lol

HOLY CRAP THIS IS BEAUTIFUL I HATED HOW ANA WAS IN THE BOOKS AND YOU RE-WROTE EVERYTHING PERFECTLY I LOVE THIS YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! :-D

LOL WOW. That was seriously disturbing. And yet, it was more realistic than FSOG lol.

I love Remy's bursts of passion. I hope to see more of Adam soon. :)

OhmygoodNESS. You are so talented. I truly hope you will work to become a published author. I would read everything. Not only are your sex scenes exceptionally detailed, so are your characters. You should be proud of yourself.

Yes! I love it. You're awesome.