every time i see “i don’t feel so good” i get so triggered i feel attacked

That was. The best. Ending. EVAH! XD
I absolutely love Adam’s childish personality, but Chase is always my favorite.
This was a great story, I really enjoyed reading it, thanks for making this!

This story had so much heart and a really compelling plot. Thank you for writing. Even 3 years later, you made my day!

I love "persistent, insistent, annoying" Leo. Excellent chapter. Thank you for writing.

This is intense and really good! Thanks for the wild ride, can't wait to finish it. Well done.

I love this. Amazing.

I HAD to leave a comment for this. There were several reasons as to why I absolutely had to comment.

One, this story creates fluff without the dialogue being to sappy. The characters and events seem so natural. You (author) made to story dramatic, sentimental, and added some sappiness to it without taking it to an excessive level. Everything, from the characters to their actions flows almost perfectly.

Second, many of the stories here are great and all but they tend to suffer from the same problem the show suffers from. Both the show and fanfactions half halfheartedly address issues like bullying and the relationship between the 3 siblings that can tend to become abusive. Believe me, I know siblings fight and can be mean to each other. I HAVE a sibling. We would fight all the time and and still fight all the time but it never got to the point where we tried to strip each other from all self esteem, pride, and confidence. We didn't intentionally try to completely belittle each others self worth, we simply got into it with each other. So in that front it's sort of ridiculous and unbelievable. But, you, you actually addressed this issue and played it out smoothly and naturally.

Third, your way of writing is amazing and fun to read. Great job!

Aww that's so adorable

This story was amazing and well written. I loved the ending! I truly enjoyed reading it! One thing I noticed though is that you said the story is finished, but it isn't marked as completed. I just thought I'd tell you so you know! Anyway, I really loved it and I look forward to reading more of your stories!

Aw, gotta love Adam, don't you?

Oh shoot-this is gonna kill me.

Aw gosh...this is entertaining and depressing at the same time.

Well, this is interesting...everything looks bleak for Chase though...but I'd like to see some Adam on this...

Captivity fics are always interesting...

I don't know why but him being controlled like that is pretty creepy but awesome.