Reviews for Through the Veil Strangely
jCOOLn chapter 1 . 7/17
You did a fantastic job writing this story. It was a real pleasure to read. It would be interesting to see the reverse happen with Harry’s soul fusing with someone from the 40k world. Top three pics! Clone Fulgrim, Clone Horus, Konrad Curze.
hemotem chapter 6 . 3/8
Love the story! I would have loved to see more of their experiments and how they worked or not worked, or just more ...umm... Luna & Harry madness. )

Thank you for a great read and I will look forward to seeing more from you in the future.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/27
You are turning harry into a freak
FinalCyberNet chapter 6 . 1/25
one of my favorite fanfiction
Commissar Waffles chapter 6 . 1/17
An interesting story, for sure.
If I may, I believe it to have vastly missed out on its potential, but it *is* a short story, so for that it cannot be faulted. Regardless, a great read on its own and reminiscent of anything other than any bog-standard fan fiction in quality.
Sable Dawn chapter 3 . 1/4
Now that i think of it, it would be kinda coll if Atem's blood turned dumbledore into a psudo marine, like the Emperor did for Leman Russ's pals.
TheAutarch chapter 6 . 12/16/2019
This Was Hilarious. please keep writing
funstm chapter 3 . 12/4/2019
I'm not sure I've ever read anything funnier than Harry cutting off Dumbledore's arm. This is brilliant.
Lord Damon Darkfyre chapter 6 . 10/24/2019
More? Please? Maybe random Astartes (who isnt batshit) as teacher? Or maybe the emperor himself as a teacher? Complete with golden armor?
mickeysofine chapter 6 . 10/5/2019
What happened with Dudley and the Dursley's?
kronos797 chapter 6 . 9/24/2019
this is a great story.
TheWateringWizard chapter 6 . 8/24/2019
Haha funny ending ! That was a great ending ! Reminds me of your Inquisitor Carrow series except that Harry isn’t as scary. However he’s still as amazing at causing chaos and mayhem
TheWateringWizard chapter 5 . 8/24/2019
Did Snape understand what had been used to create the cat form ? I’m really curious
TheWateringWizard chapter 4 . 8/24/2019
You know it’s really annoying that Snape keeps interrupting his experiences and they keep getting detention ! Why does Harry always get shy and ashamed when he’s caught ? I wish Harry would take a step back in these moments and let the Astartes handle the situation
TheWateringWizard chapter 3 . 8/24/2019
The end of that chapter was hilarious
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