Tifa and cloud had kids here?

Got kinda confusing near the middle, but I managed to catch up.

Alright, I barely found this. It looks good.

Wonderful

So much happened this chapter that I finished wondering what the hell just happened..?

I would so like to see this story continued. I have read and re-read it over and over again, and have been captivated every time. Great start, amazing plot that makes me thrust for more, great chapter length, and awesome character development. Keep up the awe inspiring work.

Is there any chance that this will ever get finished? I have really enjoyed reading what you have so far.

You should has kept out the traitorous Weasley and ugly Ginny, its disgusting. Everyone else is pretty okay, but the weasley, never trusted them and I cannot see them in any good light. It ruins a story

update this please it's pretty epic

Please update your story soon!

Enjoyed it very much hope you pick it up and finish writing

more plz

Please continue!

Okay, while the story is definitely good, one thing keeps bothering me. You keep contradicting yourself with the Bones ladies' hair colors. Earlier in the story (the chapter Sirius was broken out) Amelia had greying blonde hair while last chapter she had greying auburn. Susan was also a ginger last chapter and while you did say she was a redhead in this chapter too, when Ginny first saw her you said she had strawberry blonde hair. It is really annoying reading that and have your mind thrown out of the story because it sees the inconsistencies.

No English person says vacation.
And it's spelled damn, unless you're talking about irrigation or hydroelectrics
Some other minor spelling mistakes and mildly annoying repetition but otherwise awesome work.
Just trying to make something good a little better.