Reviews for Trying
Guest chapter 7 . 9/8/2018
Please Continue
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2018
I'm taller than he is at 5'9" and people say that girls are short.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/26/2017
Tina Fisher the realtor?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/12/2017
Ok I just wanted to tell you that you have a major plot is in hospital in one chapter and in the next this one she's already dead?
Hope you will fix this
Calcium
InkWizard chapter 7 . 2/12/2017
Hey this is good, I encourage you to complete it. :)
Lil Moon Moon chapter 7 . 12/1/2015
Oh'great deity who wrote thy story, I beg thee for I am in love with it.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2015
I know many people have asked this but could you please continue? I love this so far
inoseepoint chapter 4 . 7/25/2014
waaahhhh so sad but i love it
Guest chapter 7 . 7/24/2014
Oh please, please, PLEASE update. Every chapter was almost mesmorizing and enticing! I felt as if I was actually there with jack. The story is WONDERFUL so far and I can't wait to see what's coming next!
Raven chapter 7 . 7/21/2014
One more!
One more!
jasdevi's secret sissy chapter 7 . 5/31/2014
jackie baby!come here and let me woves yousss!
fangirlineedofhelp chapter 7 . 5/25/2014
Please update this story soon. Its driving me crazy that the next chapter isn't up yet! Im loving this story coz its so different from all the others and i need it to be updated. anyway thanks 3
supersta126 chapter 7 . 5/11/2014
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON! I love this story and I can't wait for more. Maybe get into some more details about the project. XD
xKizzyy chapter 7 . 5/10/2014
Pefection. That's basically what your writing is. I really am so happy you rewrote this.c:
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 7 . 4/21/2014
Wow the drama ;) great chapter loved it can't wait for the next one :)
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