I really want to say that I love your One Piece stories so much because they tend to have what a lot of stories lack. HEART. Every story you craft is just imbued with such softness and feeling that it really gets through to your readers so much and I wanted to congratulate you on a fantastic job done.
Thank you

How awesome.

They are all so protectiv, it is awesome!

Exellent writting, I loved this story

I am really sorry but this is not really a fanfic this is sooo totally cannon

Very good

I am forever finding fics of yours...and I love it. Don't stop!

I really, really love this! There aren't many stories that show me that the Straw Hats really are pirates and not actually heroes (because it's somehow really hard to remember that). I really love how they just crowd around Luffy and love on him and they'd never do that with anyone else because to them no one else is as important as he is.

The whole Usopp and Luffy interaction was spot on! I just love to see the two of them together and the way that Usopp takes care of his captain is so heartwarming. He's such a mother hen. And Sanji was brilliant too. Just love how you write him as well.

Outsider point of view can be hard to write and I commend you for pulling it off so well. This is so wonderful and it's perfect. Thanks for giving us this glimpse of the Straw Hats and their priorities through the eyes of an innocent child. :D

Nakama! Man, this is the reason why I love the Strawhats:)

Aaawww!

yay for overprotective crew! :D :D

Impressive story!

I LOVE YOU EVEN MORE

So true, i love your sh fics

This was absolutely brilliant! I wish it was many many more chapters so that I could enjoy it longer