Please update soon

is o.k.

I mean you have a fiction beginn and this is a question from beginn to end... ( Sorry i'm from Germany and my englich is a little bit)

Just love story so far, Can't wait for the next update

Just delete the story and start over when you have time

Write in your native language and then use Google translate or send it to seine who can translate the story into English for you.

so unfair to get our hopes

please update story.

Great job keep it up try to make the story longer update soon

Dude this seemes like a fantastic start for greast story i hope you update it soon

Fairly good, (I'd sign in to ffnet and actually send you a pm, but I figured this would do) it's a pretty good start, I have always liked , so far I can't wait to see where you go with it

Like how the story is beginning hope that you will keep up the great work and update soon.

I hope you turn this into a rescue fic. It is interesting so far.

Tom.

That was... Short.

Put up a second chapter and then I will be able to judge your writing style better.

very short hoping that future chapters are longer could use a bit more detail but other than that a good start p.s read your profile I am the 1%