Another cute and beautiful oneshot

Thank you so much for writing this fic! I love it from beginning to end.. I love how their relationship progressed, it really fits with their characters, especially Lightning.. Fave moment was when Fang kissed Lightning before the final battle, and in a way, asking her to be safe..

You really caught Lightning's character well.
A beautiful fic.

I had a sanguine fap to this.

I've now read quite a few of you fics and, while I'm in love with some of your longer ones, I think this one might be my favorite (this, or your Jack and Miranda one - that one rocks). I love the the way you've captured the characters so well, how realistic the dialogue and thoughts are, and the progression of the relationship is handled really well within the shorter length of the story. A great read; thankyou for writing it.

Aww.. This is so sweet and deep.. It really touches the character of lightning personality.. I love it.. And very romantic.. It's like watching a deep movie and you see their story in their eyes.. I hope you can make more.. It's really touching .. Thank you so much for sharing it.

Beautifully written. Really enjoyed it

This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I bow to your talent as a writer. You were able to set the proper mood right at the beginning and it was a roller coaster ride of emotions from beginning to end. It was so well written and with good taste that I envy you! You portrayed Lightning and Fang to perfection. I'll keep a close eye on you from now on! :)

Great job, the characterization was spot on!

I decided to check out your other works after reading your Swan Queen fic Of Love and Loathing because I think you're a fantastic writer. And then I got excited when I saw that you wrote a Flight fic which I must say is one of my favorite ship. You captured Light and Fang's characters here so perfectly and the progression of their relationship is what I imagine it would have been given that Light is so guarded.
Thank you for writing such a beautiful fic and sharing it with us.

This was a very well written one-shot. I enjoyed reading it from the beginning until the end. Thank you for the story.

That was really good I read it in one sitting :D very good story and I enjoyed it a lot especially when Fang kissed her before their fight with Orphan and when Fang and Vanille returned, also the steamy goodness at the end :3

Absolutely amazing, I was grinning the whole time I was reading this wonderful piece of fic. I think you captured both of their personalities perfectly, and the chemistry between those two...gorgeous.

Ah I'm so in love with this fic

I miss FLight in FFXIII setting, because to be honest, I'm not a big fan of FFXIII-2 and Lightning Returns because of the story. But I'm glad that Fang returns in LR, because hell yea, we need her to help Lightning. I bought that game because of her lol. Sorry, random rambling XD

I wish this really happens in the game. I think you nailed the character perfectly and just... ah *clutches heart because ALL OF THE FLIGHT FEELS

I really hope that you write more FLight, this fandom needs more fic and fanarts XD

Keep writing, great job :)

Oh my god, it's perfect!

They're in character and I can totally picture this in the game. It's like it's canon, even though - sadly - it's not.

I really hope that you write more FLight. I love your writing :)

Great job XD