NOOOOOOOOO! UPDATE NOW! I NEED MORE HOLY CRAP DONT LET IT END LIKE THIS! I SWEAR TO GOD! THIS IS THE BEST TWD FANFIC I HAVCE EVER READ AND I'VE READ A LOT OF THEM! I know I'm probably over reacting but it really is amazing. I love your writing style.

Uh, excuse me - new reader here - could you please unmark your story as "complete" since it's obviously not? I don't tend to start reading fics that are incomplete when their last update was over a year-and-a-half ago, so I feel a little like I was manipulated into reading this. Since it was probably not your intention to trick me, I just thought I'd let you know the story's incorrectly marked so that other readers like me don't get confused. :)

Thanks for sharing what you did of this fic! It was great while it lasted! I'll be putting it on alert just in case you decide to continue writing it in the future. Cheers!

Hey, looking forward to the next update! Good writing! :))
I'd like it if you were to develop their relationship first before going to all the action and shit Alexandria is going to be facing or use the action to settle their teen drama and let them realise they like each other haha

Hi I really like your story line for this and I think you should have it that Ashly ends up finding a compound bow while she was outside the walls and have Daryl teach her how to use it. I know she has her throwing knives but a bow would still be pretty damn cool, and I know this reply is probably one in a million but I hope you take my idea but if you don't it's fine Yours truly, a dedicated fan :)

UPDATE SOON !

OMGGGGGG PLEASE UPDATE BUT I WOULD LIKE IF U CONTINUED WITH DEVELOPING THEIR RELATIONSHIP FIRST AND THEN GET TO THE ACTION BUT PLEASE UPDATE LIKE I LOVE THIS SO MUCH AND I WOULD BE DEVISTAED IF U DIDNT UPDATED ! PLEASE

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I mean I know some people are good at killing zombies after a while in the apocalypse but seriously you're OC seems OP

Oh I love this story! Hope there'll be more :)

:) hope U will update soon

I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! If you can't update too quickly it's fine at least you update, it's better than never updating right. Well hope you have a good day, if you aren't then that's okay, everyone has their bad days and good days, but your story is making my day every single day, so thank you, and us supporters will be by your side day or night, maybe not all day but you know what I mean, so yeah, and I think you shouldn't skip ahead to where the story is, you'll get there sooner or later, so please don't skip ahead it'll kind of mess up where you are right now, but it's your opinion if you wanna, but that's my advice. Sorry this review might be SUPER long but I'm just expressing my feelings to this fanfic story, which is a lot so I hope you don't mind resding this, if you are going to read it. So hope you have a splendid day, wherever your at. See you in the next chapter cause I'm going to do another review there too, and it migt be super long like this one, but, I'll see, so again goodbye. (SPELLING MAY BE WRONG LIKE MY USERNAME THING BUT I CAN NOT SPELL THAT WELL, OH WELL SORRY).

You need to continue with this story...its so...well paced. I'll be looking for updates.

Great chapter, I got a confused the the days but I'm probably just dumb. Keep writing, I like how you skipped all that other hooplah like the church and beth. UPDATE SOON!

Yay! An update! I don't think you should skip ahead to where the show currently is. And it's okay for the late update, but at least you did update, it is better than never updating. BTW I am in love with this fanfic, words can't even explain it. And pleas update ASAP. Thanks. :)

I don't think you should skip ahead, following the story's plotline would probably be best. I know this chapter you said Ron was shaken by his dad's death and the family was overall happier but I really think you should have Ron be more the way he is in the show. The hate he seems to have for Rick and Carl could open up some doors for your character. Maybe she gets suspicious of Ron when he all of a sudden wants to learn how to shoot? Maybe her keeping an eye on him forces her and Carl to spend more awkward time together if all the teens are hanging out? I think it'd be really exciting to see your OC in season 6 once the story gets there!