| Reviews for Gaining Freedom, Losing Innocence |
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sandivivaelanime chapter 31 . 7/10 Please update Por favor termine el fic es muy buena y original toda la trama yo utilizó traductor para leerla y me encanta |
Faery66 chapter 30 . 3/26 Hope to read more soon. D |
Lucky Lucy Heart chapter 31 . 3/21 PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you upload it SOON! PLEASE have Charlie as one of Harry’s mates! |
Cool2002 chapter 31 . 1/31 I hope you continue this story! |
DemetriLover28 chapter 31 . 9/18/2019 Great story. Hope you update soon. I would love to read more. |
blackstarlight17 chapter 31 . 8/27/2019 I've just finished reading all the chapters in less than two days. It's been a very interesting tale and I hope to see more chapters. And if not that, then more stories in Harry's growth as well as the growth of the others. While there are areas that made reading a bit hard, namely some errors in spelling and such, it was minor and I still enjoyed it enough. Some scenes left me grinning or having to pause because I was laughing too much to focus. I'll also admit that while I like the canon pairings, I've gotten to become a fan of certain fan pairings. I've also been intrigued by pairings I don't normally think of, such as hinting a Flint x Percy pairing and a somewhat recent one, Harry x Theo. Speaking of pairings, while I feel Harry and Theo's seemed to go rather fast the moment they meet, at the same time it works. They've been forced to grow up fast while trying to keep a firm hold on the brakes to avoid losing total control, Harry especially. It'll be interesting to see how things progress between them and what might be done to bring them closer. I mean, given how much Dumbledore's losing control, I wouldn't be surprised to find future chapters/stories of him attempting to do something to either break them up or potentially harm Theo thinking it would bring Harry back to his side somehow. However, that goes though or any ideas you have, they're yours. I just hope that you'll continue to have fun writing as it seems you've been and life stops kicking your butt. |
tkawaiii2013 chapter 31 . 3/29/2019 you are amazin. thats a Beautiful fic. |
Guest chapter 16 . 3/13/2019 Wouldn't Care of Magical Creatures be a better choice than Astronomy for a healer? You know, since St. Mungo's is supposed to have a ward for Creature-Related Injuries. |
Please chapter 31 . 2/25/2019 Please continue this |
harl956 chapter 1 . 2/12/2019 Is this story finished? |
MerlinofGryffindor chapter 31 . 1/6/2019 This is one of the absolute best hp fan fictions I’ve ever read. Honestly. The detail. The plot. Harry and Theo’s relationship. It’s absoltely incredible! |
Selena Nyx chapter 2 . 11/5/2018 Mina and drachma... |
shinrakishitani chapter 31 . 10/27/2018 this has been one of the best fanfictions i have read for the harry potter universe. harry and theos budding relationship is amazing and wonderfully thought out. i can not wait to see where it goes from here. Astiar you re an mazing author i can not wait for more from you. |
Oceanfloweroflife chapter 31 . 10/20/2018 Please update! ! ! ! ! ! |
LibbyRose chapter 31 . 8/16/2018 i love this! i love it so much, this is one of the best stories i have ever read. please update, its so good! |