Awesome writing here hon! I loved this but dearly wish that there was more of it! ;o)

Awwwwww I really loved this. Especially when Elijah realised his feelings.

Wow ! It's the best story of Elijah and Elena I've read, I just fell in love

This is great; and, really hot.

Love it.

so, not the Bonkai author i thought you were, it turns out, but still someone whose stories I have on my faves list! gonna re-read this delicious gem now, it was almost one of the first things i ever favorited. I prefer Elijah with Katherine, but that's probably more my love of dysfunctional relationships than anything else. and regardless, your Elena and Elijah are so delightful in this fic that I really couldn't care less

Its not non but more doubious constent because she want it she chellanged him, still knew who and what he was. Say to Powerful more then tousand year old vampire be broken you to each other men. Is impossibly stupid. She can only expect TERRIBLY pleasure time taking ever her Power its even miricale that she can move after some member . And that she was dont broke someting, i knew that he must be carful but too long fucking in some moment women is too sensitiv and swollen to feel pleasure from touch. It is reason why we need a time to recovery .be taken time and time again by hours without recovery can hurt you. Why you think whore need time after her client and so many women end in hospital after group rape. After someting like it she end hurt not pleasured. And i dont think that she was enougt time to recovery. Human have easer men need more time to recovery
Vampire give him moment. You could be carful about you Ask.

I know someone told you it was non-com but I'd have to disagree. The way you wrote this piece, well, I actually like Elena right now and I'm no where a fan of the show-version. So bravo for your excellent writing and know you have my vote of confidence

Please write more elejah!

Please write more elejah! I love all ur stories

I'd love Elijah with lots of flattery...with my eyeballs.

One of the best Elijah/Elena stories out there, these two are one of my top OTPs... and forever will be.

Why the fuck would Elena laugh and giggle after he raped her

I really liked the story and your writing is just brilliant but i really Hoped that elijah would heal her somewhere between her stating that she can't no more and hin biting her for the third time. I know from experience that it can be extremely uncomfortable to have someone constantly hitting your womb and that the Uterus will cramp if your Partner does hit home too often. Poor Elena

This story left me breathless. My God was it amazing! Please write more in this style.