No Idea what people are on about, I think your characters are very well done. I love William, there is hardly a point where he doesn't have me laughing.

I love the way he talks, I can imagine him standing there with one are behind is back and the other with his fingers lightly pressed to his chest, using it to slightly emphasize certain words like an old noble might.

Must say, overall, thoroughly impressive.

It does deserve far more reviews for the obvious effort put forth.
Its exceedingly clean and well polished.
I'm just sad for rainbows turmoil...

Now ill have to read the first part of the story which I have foolishly neglected.

Retribution... Well done.

Still sad for what rd had to go through :(

After all dash has already been through... really? As sad as it is, this situation occurs to countless victims of abuse everyday... But damn it, its not fucking fair...

I know, life isn't fair.

Just... this continual dash torture... it was one thing in the beginning, having her cope with past psychological hell but now this?!

such sinister of evils...

I'd give up on this story if it weren't almost over already.
I know i cant blame the author for anything because its just a portrayal of real life drama, but damn it... it hurts when your favorite character is getting every ounce of stuffing beat out of her...
feeling more like "drama/tragedy"

Now that's what i call comedic relief!

xD

Damn, at first, that scene with tiara psychologically torturing Wiliam made me want to vomit and say 'f-it' to the story, but then i realized that it may very well be portraying to a small degree the abuse dash went through with Wills father.

I had hoped for significantly more detail on the subject of what dash had gone through but i can assume it was glazed over for good reason...poor dash :(

Otherwise, extremely intriguing story.

Brilliant

Beautiful authors note. Well said. I'm very grateful for the highly creative character designs.

Such eloquent vocabulary in this story...

Delightful to find such clean writing once in a while.

Damn. This story is powerful in every direction...

Bravo

If i ever met william, off is the direction in whitch i wish he would fuck.

...Twice now that filly was involved in poisoning...methinks foul play

Oh Dear...this isn't going to end well is it?

Also, welcome to the reality bending anomaly that is Pinkie William

You're a mean one...Cherrilee... (sung to the tune of Mr. Grinch).

But seriously, Getting a real Hannibal Lecter vibe from this kid

Oh yeah, that's Discord & Rainbow's kid alright.

Balls of steel and completely unpredictable.