WHY DID I READ EVERY SINGLE LINE FROM THE SNAKE AS A GROWN ASS MEXICAN I-

Evil Dumbledore is always fun to read! But poor Hagrid :(

I started following this back 3 years ago and yes, I'm following the re-write, but there's so little of that one posted, so far; that I had to come back to this one to get a bit more of a 'fix'! lol! XD
I'm not sure if I commented about this the first time through, but it might be something to note in your re-write, as it's applicable to this section here and goes towards the idea that Tom's not necessarily a bad guy! Okay, here it goes:

If the Phoenix, in magical lore and mythology, is this wholly *good* and pure magical creature then how could Harry AND *Tom* both have a Phoenix feather wand core, FROM THE SAME PHOENIX?!
Rowling wanted us to believe Dumblebore's account of his visit to Wool's Orphanage to deliver Tom's Hogwarts letter, so she has the MOB show Harry a Pensieve 'memory' of the encounter with the slovenly, drunken Matron of the facility. We're supposed to take the word of this angry, frightened, hypocritical sot about the behavior and actions of a little 11 year old orphan boy; about how he was so hateful and 'evil' that they'd even tried performing an *Exorcism* on the child! He supposedly 'terrorized' the other 'sweet' and 'good' children and killed another kid's 'pet rabbit'! (Gosh, have we ever heard anyone else in these books, telling how a certain child was an inveterate 'liar' and a lazy, good for nothing 'layabout'; who was said to be going to be attending "St. Brutus' School for Incorrigible Youth"?! Gee, do we see a pattern?!) KNOWING what we do, about how 'muggles' react around unexplained phenomenon and especially in the still HIGHLY superstitious 1930's; WHY would Dumbasadoor take this *muggle's* word for Tom's character and morality?!
If Tom was 'evil personified', according to Dumbles assessment, then how could he possibly have even TOUCHED a wand with the core of a Phoenix feather?! Take that Rowling: You screwed up!
Just thought I'd throw that out there. ;D
Looking forward to you updating the re-write, soon!
Thanks!
MelJ :D

Don't rewrite it's good very good so update soon.

it was Dumbledore

I actually enjoyed the story. I agree it could be a lot tighter. You had a lot of author’s notes with story information that you might want to somehow incorporate into the story for clarification of some points. Can’t wait to pop over to the rewrite to read it now.

Loving this fic and hope to read more soon! ;o)

I love your story and the idea behind it. Honestly I don't think you needed to rewrite it, but either way I would love to see either this one or the rewritten version finished. I can't wait to see Harry's relationship with Tom and Severus once Tom has his body back. Please update soon!

I think hedwig should also be a familar

Nice story, I'm begging you to continue. One thing though: according to the Queen of the Wizarding world, JK, Nagini was the boa constrictor that Harry released from the zoo. Obviously that's not happening in this story but just a note that I was curious about. Thanks for a great story,
Keep on writing,
Mich Phish

Great my friend, great!

I actually like chapters before and want to read continuation:)

Yo en realidad estoy leyendo por el emparejamiento Severus/Tom. Me gustó el romance entre ellos. Me parece bien que reescribas la historia. Y me gustó mucho este Tom y varios personajes, lograste que los aceptara de corazón.

Should you pick up the story again, a small bit of advice. Separate the conversations into their own paragraphs. It's slightly confusing to see two or more people speaking in the same paragraph...hard to keep track of who's speaking at the moment. Other than that, an interesting take.

Voldemort is just as evil as Dumbledore is