That was really good!I like how you captured what the inner workings of the teenage mind is REALLY whole build up to them admitting their feelings was well done not alot of people can really get that you whole thing with the mom agreeing with everything (the picking up and dropping off everyday and going out)felt kinda unrealistic to me but it worked to developed the plot.I like that Danny wasn't an ass and that Rach was a love dad kinda was m.i.a for most of the book but i can understand that,girls usually go to mom rather than ,I'm really proud of this it up.

I loved this story! It was great

Hold up. Did you think - Did you honestly think that this wonderful work of yours could just slide by and go unnoticed by the Dan Radar?

Well, think again! Because like it or not, I have zoned in, and honed in on this precious little gem of yours, read every single word of your brilliance, and just posted this rockin' feedback comment, right here, right now, for you to find, read, and enjoy.

Maybe it won't be the highlight of your day, maybe it will. I just hope you get some sort of kick out of it, at least.
Peace out!
- Dan.

Omg I love the way u introduced Ronnie and Filkins!

There's so much emotion in this chapter; hurt, anger, confusion. It made it more interesting and enjoyable to read.

But what I liked the most in this chapter, was how you ended it with Terry saying;
"...Maggie?" It shows us that he is vulnerable here, something he has never shown or indicated in previous chapters. It makes the reader feel a little more for his character. Very nice job.

This is one of my absolute favorite chapters in the story. I really liked how you incorporated Alexandria and Ronnie into this scene. It lets us know a little more about their relationship, and gives more depth to their characters. Very well written!

Haha! I actually laughed out loud while reading this! Great job writing this chapter, I love your humor.

\(o)/ whirlwind of emotions!

OMG! I luv evry bit of this!

Well, what can I say? You've managed to add humor, drama, suspense, and romance while keeping each and every individual in character. Each sentence has flow, and every single line has a purpose. Nothing unneeded added here.

I especially liked how you weaved in and out of Maggie and Terry's points of view, and how you incorporated a scene with Ronnie's point of view as well. You did a very good job writing this, I enjoyed reading it a lot.

OMG! I love, love, LOVE it! Terry is so in character, and so are all the rest of the characters from Drillbit Taylor! You have to make more fanfictions for this! :D

Congratulations on finishing your first story, I really enjoyed it :D Oh and please do write a Hunger Games fanfic, we need more quality Galeniss! D:

Okay I may be the only one, but I thought it was hilarious to watch (well, read) Filkins get a gift for Maggie. It was sweet, and funny XD I think this is my second favorite chapter, besides the party one of course ;)

Omg this is definitely my favorite chapter :D I am absolutely eating up all the Filkins-ness lol X3 great job on this chapter, it's definitely a keeper ;)

OMG! I luv chapter 17! It's so good! It's too bad you ended it though :/ Will u b making any one-shots? :D