i love the story thus far and i love how cool naruto is. also itachi and naruto and kyoko, i will die for those three as a team

You’re really good and a comedian. You know how to make the viewers smile and laugh. Love it; Keep up the good work.

I really enjoyed your story about Naruto becoming part of root. You showed more than just a mindless killing drone, showed that even those drones can have emotions and above all else, you showed how capable Naruto became while not overpowering him too much and at the same time making him pretty strong. But above all else, you didn't painted Danzo as a pure evil man with cruel and devastating worldviews. I appreciate that the most, because that makes him human too. And the best part? Naruto isn't some slave, but has his own ideals and views on certain topics(even if their somewhat twisted from the norm). I was so close to add this story to my personal "Best Naruto fanfic" collection, until you pulled that little stunt with Kushina. I'm gonna be honest with you, that was in my opinion a very bad move. I really enjoyed the OC character that you build up. It made sense and played it's part as a mysterious Sensei that was somewhat connected to Naruto. Kushina being that Sensei cancels that idea, but most importantly does not fit with Kushinas image at all. For me personally, It felt somewhat forced, and the twist felt as nothing more than senseless shock value. I might be overreacting, but the character Kushina was always stated to be gently and lovingly but at the same time an exploding furry. Her becoming root and considering Minato as weak, is so out of Character, that I could compare it to Danzo promoting an easier Genin test. Other than that, there is really nothing to criticise about. The basic aspects of your writing style are also nicely done. Other than that Kushina business, this story is a very great written and thought out story!

Yours dearly
~kaffeenator

So I have to ask. Kyoko. Is she Kushina? Or have you somehow been writing about two different characters? In which case, where the actual f*ck has Kushina been and why isn’t anybody surprised she’s alive? You know, of the two or three people to have addressed her as Kushina. I would ask if people have been mistaking one for the other, but from the sounds of things, the people addressing her as Kushina should really know her well enough to not be mistaken.

This chapter was awesome! Kyoko is a character I really appreciate and I loved seeing the different perspectives of all the characters in this chapter.

Amazing Story. Please continue it !

I love this story

just go rogue he knows how The ROOT shinobi operate he can just as easily dispose of them. the only threat is Kyoko

Such a good story! I'm so mad at you! How did you write such a gem and leave them in the maze!? I'm in anguish. I knew it wasn't finished, but what's with the black/white tiles. They're in the wind room! Wind can be used like knives! I'm so beside myself. Lol. And you dropped all knew information in this chapter like you never planned to wrap this up. Lmbo! Anyway, excellent story.

Amazing story, I hope you come back to update it! It's a story I'd love to see the end of.

Ok you you will are doing it. Ia in this fucked up Story had my favorite Character Naruto. You made him such a poor execuse of a Shinbi and pathetic! And that u killed Shisui shows that u have no absolute NO creativity!

WTF? You are one of the worst reall? in this Story Itachi is not noble, hell not even in Canon he is noble he is a fucked up Hyprocrite, I mean save his Brother but kill all other Children?! he needs to be killed the most brutal way possible! Maybe befor that kill Sasuke very very very brutal before u finish Itachi !

This is soooooo gud, keep up the good work!

Excellent fic, hope you come back to it!

Excellent story so far, I can hardly wait to read more of it! I hope that you are able to find the time to update this story, sometime soon.

Keep up the great work!