I really like this story a lot because Roommates is one of my favorite visual novels. I also like how you used several quotes from the game in your story especially the one from the Halloween party.

Yaya an Anne x Isabella story! I was thunking no one write VN fanfics but i guess i stand corrected.I love ur story! Hope u write more!

Nice. Just got the Isabella ending. easily my favorite. :)

IsabellaxAnne is definitely better written than Max's with her. Probably my favorite from the game.

man this is some great writing! more! more!

The story caught my attention! Very well written.
You have talent, girl! Keep writing and unleashing your imagination. I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story and I hope to read more short stories written by you. :)